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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away? v.8

Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away? v. 8
Food wastage has become a common problem in every part of the world. People waste lots of edibles nowadays either when going for dining in the restaurant or at home brought refreshments. This essay will discuss what are the reasons behind this and what can be done to improve it. Bygone is the era, when the price are used to be quite high due to lack of technology and resources. With the development of new tech of producing food there is more than 70% of it is being wasted on a daily basis and 1. 4 million of people die every day due to starvation. For example, people with disposable income order large quantity of edibles at once from which more than a half of it is being litter. However, development is only good to that extent unless it benefits everyone. Authorities play vital role in the solution as advertising in T. V and holding of campaigns. For instance, if once in a month there should be educational programs being done by community on Food wastage and thus letting them know how blissful they are that they are getting the proper nutrients and are poor are being die of it every day. Nearly half of the garbage will decrease in a few years. Therefore, public awareness by government is a compulsory task to stop this. To recapitulate, Getting enough nourishment is must for body development as well as for surviving so there should be rules by the authorities to stop the wastage and also for future benefits.
Food wastage has become a common problem in every part of the world.
People
waste lots of edibles nowadays either when going for dining in the restaurant or at home brought refreshments. This essay will discuss what are the reasons behind this and what can
be done
to
improve
it.

Bygone is the era, when the price are
used
to be quite high due to lack of technology and resources. With the development of new tech of producing food there is more than 70% of it is
being wasted
on a daily basis and 1. 4 million of
people
die
every day due to starvation.
For example
,
people
with disposable income order large quantity of edibles at once from which more than a half of it is being litter.
However
, development is
only
good
to that extent unless it benefits everyone.

Authorities play vital role in the solution as advertising in T. V and holding of campaigns.
For instance
, if once in a month there should be educational programs
being done
by community on Food wastage and
thus
letting them know how blissful they are that they are getting the proper nutrients and are poor are being
die
of it every day.
Nearly
half of the garbage will decrease in a few years.
Therefore
, public awareness by
government
is a compulsory task to
stop
this.

To recapitulate, Getting
enough
nourishment is
must
for body development
as well
as for surviving
so
there should be
rules
by the authorities to
stop
the wastage and
also
for future benefits.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away? v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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