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Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice

In burgeoning world, students need to get exposure from out side world either by doing work or by travelling before they enter into their higher studies in university. In my opinion, through work, trainee can know what happening in the global and it helps to analyses their future planes. As soon as scholar step out of boundary they experience innovative place that is different from their surrounding. Student tries to adjust themselfs around such places and identify their goals while doing. For example trainee with intellectual ability in academic do not know what is happening around the world. Only they expert in getting high grades. Due to this majority of people are affecting after their graduation and strugling their way out. On the other hand, the knowledge that acquire through learning cannot come from job. So, doing work not helpful to settle in the life for a longer period. For example scholar with high grade gets paid huge amount after their graduation then people working before university education they think that working for sometimes, getting wages makes them feel satisfied and reduces their craving for better life. However, working at different localities makes them to know different cultures and figures motive of their life. And making necessary calculating from that day onwards. To put it in a nut shell, I pen down saying that working at different environment undergraduates gets the exposure that they can't find in the academic way.

In burgeoning world, students need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 exposure from Did you mean "outside"?outside
out side
 world either by doing work or by travelling This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 they enter into their higher studies in university. In my opinion, through work, trainee can know what happening in the global and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to The verb after "to" should be in the base form: "analyse".analyse
analyses
 their future This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircrafts
planes
.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as scholar step out of boundary they experience innovative place that is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrastingdisparatedistinctdistinctivepeculiaroffbeat
different
 from their surrounding. Student tries to adjust Possible spelling mistake found.themself
themselfs
 around such places and identify their goals while doing. For example
 trainee with intellectual ability in academic do not know what is happening around the world. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
Only
 they expert in getting high grades. Due to this majority of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are affecting after their graduation and Possible spelling mistake found.struggling
strugling
 their way out.

On the other hand
, the knowledge that acquire through learning cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 from job. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, doing work not helpful to settle in the life for a longer period. For example
 scholar with high grade This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 paid huge amount after their graduation then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 university education they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
, getting wages This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 them feel satisfied and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviates
reduces
 their craving for better life.

However
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
 at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrastingdisparatedistinctdistinctivepeculiaroffbeat
different
 localities This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 them to know You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrastingdisparatedistinctdistinctivepeculiaroffbeat
different
 cultures and figures motive of their life. And making necessary calculating from that day onwards.

To put it in a nut shell, I pen down saying that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
 at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrastingdisparatedistinctdistinctivepeculiaroffbeat
different
 environment undergraduates This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 the exposure that they can't find in the academic way. 