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nowadays people have too many choices

nowadays people have too many choices Q5NyP
Whether nowadays people have too many choices or not remains controversial. In my opinion, having lots of selection brings both advantages and disadvantages. To begin with, we have so many choices that it is sometimes difficult to make decisions. With the develoment of technology and productivity, it leads to the industrialization as more commodities and more opportunities for costumers. For example, the number of fuctional products which is large, helps buyers to compare the price between each of those and avoid some fake production. However, numerous choices often make people confuse and the products will become unnecessary for costumers because of higher opportunity costs and time-consuming. In contrast, number of selection can be not enough for some parts of population. This problem comes from the unfair distribution of wealth as existence of poverty, like some people who have low income cannot have too many choices although they live in the modern place. Moreover, the limitation of access to welfare, services also make some people cannot use, despite of its popularity. For instance, the Internet connection is familiar with most of people, but for people who lives in moutainous areas, do not have chances to use it. Besides, constrains for mankind in general about how we survive also make some kind of energy become poor. People cannot stop the deforestation because no alternatives can compare with the providing from nature. In conclusion, it is based on the kind of production for people to judge that is neccesary or not and avoid the confusion when having many choices.
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or not remains controversial. In my opinion, having lots of selection brings both advantages and disadvantages.

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with, we have
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sometimes
difficult to
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decisions. With the
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develoment
of technology and productivity, it leads to the industrialization as more commodities and more opportunities for costumers.
For example
, the number of
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fuctional
products which is large,
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helps
buyers to compare the price between each of those and avoid
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some
fake production.
However
, numerous
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choices
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often
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make
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people
confuse and the products will become unnecessary for costumers
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because
of higher opportunity costs and time-consuming.

In contrast
, number of selection can be not
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enough
for
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some
parts of population. This problem
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comes
from the unfair distribution of wealth as existence of poverty, like
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some
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people
who have low income cannot have too
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many
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although they
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live
in the modern place.
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, the limitation of access to welfare, services
also
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cannot
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,
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despite of
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,
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for
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lives
in
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moutainous
areas, do not have chances to
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use
it.
Besides
, constrains for mankind
in general
about how we survive
also
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make
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some
kind of energy become poor.
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People
cannot
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stop
the deforestation
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because
no alternatives can compare with the providing from nature.

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is based
on the kind of production for
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people
to judge
that is
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neccesary
or not and avoid the confusion when having
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many
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choices
.
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IELTS essay nowadays people have too many choices

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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