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crucial issues related to environment in recent times is the extinction of specific kinds of animals and plants

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It is believed by certain individuals that the crucial issues related to environment in recent times is the extinction of specific kinds of animals and plants. However, rest of the people believe that in spite of working on the former issue there are other more essential challenges that needs our attention. In my opinion, both the problems are important and one of them cannot be ignored. The essay would shed light on the valid standpoints in the subsequent paragraphs. With the growth of industrialization and urbanization, there is an increase in deforestation and, it leads to loss of trees and plants. Moreover, if plants are going to extinct then it can further cause disturbance in the environment and as we are aware of that there are many uses of some special plants in medicines, and they are also only source of oxygen for the human beings. Therefore, certain steps should be taken to preserve these so that there are no ecological disturbances. Animals are also in the verge of extinction as many people likes hunting and that is one of the major reasons why some specific animals are not in world today. Deforestation is again one of the key reasons for animals’ extinction as people are clearing the lands and by doing that, they are destroying the natural habitat of animals because of which survival of animals becomes difficult. Animals and plants both plays a very essential role in maintaining the food chain and if they are not present then it will lead to a great disturbance among the natural process therefore it is a very serious environmental concerns which need a lot of attention. Although plants and animals’ extinction seem to be a very prominent issue but there are many other problems which are of same importance like shortage of water, Global warming and pollution. Drinking water shortage is a very old issue which people are facing in poor countries and there are lot of steps taken but still countries are not overcoming from this problem. To conclude, all environmental issues are of equal importance irrespective of whether its affecting the world more or less. Therefore, whether its plants and animals extinction or any other environment issue, attentions should be paid to all of them so that we can protect our environment from getting damaged.
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is believed
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issues
related to
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environment
in recent times is the
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extinction
of specific kinds of
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animals
and
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plants
.
However
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people
believe that
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in spite of
working on the former
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issue
there are other more essential challenges that needs our attention. In my opinion, both the problems are
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important
and one of them cannot be
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ignored
. The essay would shed light on the valid standpoints in the subsequent paragraphs.

With the growth of industrialization and urbanization, there is an increase in deforestation and, it leads to loss of trees and
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plants
.
Moreover
, if
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plants
are going to extinct then it can
further
cause disturbance in the
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environment
and as we are aware of that there are
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many
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uses
of
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some
special
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plants
in medicines, and they are
also
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only
source of oxygen for the human beings.
Therefore
, certain steps should
be taken
to preserve these
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so
that there are no ecological disturbances.
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Animals
are
also
in the verge of
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extinction
as
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many
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people
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likes
hunting and
that is
one of the major reasons why
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some
specific
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animals
are not in world
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today
. Deforestation is again one of the key reasons for
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animals’
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extinction
as
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people
are clearing the lands and by doing that, they are destroying the natural habitat of
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animals
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because
of which survival of
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animals
becomes difficult.
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Animals
and
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plants
both plays a
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very
essential role in maintaining the food chain and if they are not present then it will lead to a great disturbance among the natural process
therefore
it is a
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very
serious environmental concerns which need
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a lot of
attention.

Although
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plants
and
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animals’
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extinction
seem to be a
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very
prominent
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issue
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but
there are
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many
other problems which are of same importance like shortage of water, Global warming and pollution. Drinking water shortage is a
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very
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old
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issue
which
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people
are facing in poor countries and there are
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lot of
steps taken
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but
still
countries are not overcoming from this problem.

To conclude
, all environmental
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issues
are of equal importance irrespective of whether its affecting the world more or less.
Therefore
, whether its
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plants
and
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animals
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extinction
or any other
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environment
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issue
, attentions should
be paid
to all of them
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so
that we can protect our
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environment
from getting damaged.
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IELTS essay crucial issues related to environment in recent times is the extinction of specific kinds of animals and plants

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
386 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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