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Nowadays, people have less tendency to bear the pain and face minor ailments as they are fully dependant on medicines for this.

Nowadays, people have less tendency to bear the pain and face minor ailments as they are fully dependant on medicines for this. VL77
Nowadays, people have less tendency to bear the pain and face minor ailments as they are fully dependant on medicines for this. With the rise in usage of different forms of medicines, there are those who think that these ways are not effective and others argue that they can be fatal. I strongly disagree with this notion and will explain that these therapies work, also if used with care they have better outcomes. There is no doubt that people are attracted towards alternatives of medicines like aromatherapy, herbal medicine and procedures like acupuncture. Other methods like Chinese and Japanese ways of meditation are also getting heed. Due to the increase in the cost of pharmaceutical medicines, it is difficult for majority to depend on them. In addition, chemical drugs have lots of adverse effects including most common nausea, headache and vomiting. On one side, if we put some light on alternative ways and their effectiveness. Most of these methods work but they have slow mode of action. For instance, if an individual wants to take full advantage of these methods, there is a need to use them for a long period of time. Herbs and other traditional therapies are really effective, when it comes to minor ailments. For example, a study reveals the rise in use of herbal teas and extracts in rural areas where people don’t have access to chemical drugs. On the other side, if we talk about toxicity and adverse nature of these methods, then as these herbs and extracts are collected from plants and other natural sources, there is no chance of any danger from them. In fact, these are the pharmaceutical drugs which have more adverse effects than these. In conclusion, I again disagree with this context as above-mentioned methods and remedies are really natural and they work a lot better than generic medicines with almost no adverse effects.
Nowadays,
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people
have less tendency to bear the pain and face minor ailments as they are
fully
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dependant
on medicines for this. With the rise in usage of
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different
forms of medicines, there are those who
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think
that these ways are not effective
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and others
argue that they can be fatal. I
strongly
disagree with this notion and will
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explain
that these therapies work,
also
if
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used
with care they have better outcomes.

There is no doubt that
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people
are attracted
towards alternatives of medicines like aromatherapy, herbal
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medicine
and procedures like acupuncture.
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Other
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methods
like Chinese and Japanese ways of meditation are
also
getting heed. Due to the increase in the cost of pharmaceutical medicines, it is difficult for majority to depend on them.
In addition
, chemical drugs have lots of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
adverse
effects including most common nausea, headache and vomiting.

On one side, if we put
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some
light on alternative ways and their effectiveness. Most of these
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methods
work
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but
they have slow mode of action.
For instance
, if an individual wants to take full advantage of these
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methods
, there is a need to
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use
them for a long period of time. Herbs and
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other
traditional therapies are
really
effective, when it
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comes
to minor ailments.
For example
, a study reveals the rise in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of herbal teas and extracts in rural areas where
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people
don’t have access to chemical drugs.

On the
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other
side, if we talk about toxicity and
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adverse
nature of these
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methods
, then as these herbs and extracts
are collected
from plants and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
natural sources, there is no chance of any
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danger
from them. In fact, these are the pharmaceutical drugs which have more
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adverse
effects than these.

In conclusion
, I again disagree with this context as above-mentioned
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methods
and remedies are
really
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natural and
they work a lot better than generic medicines with almost no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
adverse
effects.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, people have less tendency to bear the pain and face minor ailments as they are fully dependant on medicines for this.

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