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Nowadays people are trying to have a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems could this create? How can people overcome them?

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Building
new homes and business property have been expanding
astronomically
in metropolitan area. In this scenario, inhabitants build their
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buildings
in a way they like
rather
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then
implementation of any
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design
These type of activities bring
Did you mean "more drawbacks than"?
more drawbacks then
it's
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positive
impact and the reasons for my inclination
are articulated
in trail paragraphs.

In the inception, creating a property without I proper plan of
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design
may cause problem not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
is about Ventilation
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but
also
it' has become less spacious. Que to
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these problem
living in a
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house
may become
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Sulcort
ve
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people
con feel lack of space for their clothes and the things they
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use
for life chores.
Moreover
,
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people
com not
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get
direct sunlight through window. Although,
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they mange
to implement the
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style
they like they are not aware of direction of sunlight and do not have sense of
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Picsart
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design
they

In addition
to this, majority of
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people
do not have knowledge of designing
even though
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house
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wook
place
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building
they try to impose their incomplete knowledge. As a consequence, it
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makes
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building
look like scoop and less
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otructive
. If the whole
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recedential
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people
try to follow their
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own
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style
then impression of that residential area will create conflicts among
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soclety
and citizens.

In
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shure
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andoust
, it is
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building
model
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because
could be wants more to a cheaper method to
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design
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hring
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building
designer
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expenshe
.
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Sometimes
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house
owners
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Quld
the and designer case dream
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house
or work office com mot replicate
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thelx
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style
in this with
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own
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style
con
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de
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monte
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fauteuil
.
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tting


In conclusion
,
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building
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house
in need of
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own
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style
and roast
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meaNing
com be advantageous at
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some
extent.
However
, increasing construction without any plan can lead to several problems
that is
not
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.

IELTS essay Nowadays people are trying to have a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems could this create? How can people overcome them?

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  American English
5 paragraphs
289 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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