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Many people believe that individuals can do little to improve the environment, only government and large companies can make a real difference . To what extent do you agree and disagree.

Many people believe that individuals can do little to improve the environment, only government and large companies can make a real difference. 8lLG
In quick paced era, environment beauty damage is day by day. Therefore, it has been considered by numerous people that masses can do little to alleviate the atmosphere, whereas merely ministry and massive industries can make a real difference. This eassy intends to elaborate why I disagree with this notion in subsequent paragraphs. To embark with, there are multifarious factors how only individuals can reduce the earth surrounding impurities. It is omniscient that nowadays, everyone hold own vehicles which discharge poisonous gases such as carbon dioxide and monoxide. Which put detrimental impacts not only environment but also health of human beings. For example, according to the turbine, approximately 75% people have own private transport modes due to this, the whole of zone Lear is rising. Moreover, society ought to organise seminar among dwellers. As a fact of this, residents can easily aware toward the importance of atmosphere. Apartfrom this, everyone should use public modes and devote more preference to bicycle for short distance. Probing further, human beings should less use of plastic goods owing to the fact, these materials are not biodegradable. Which put inferior effects on the environment. Today, the usage of plastic bags is more popular among community. Individuals do use these plastic bags in kitchen and shopping purpose after using they adopt thrown away culture policy. For example, in Britain, plastic bags are band with the assistance of this policy the Britian nation is almost pollution free and 80% people are staying healthy as compared to another countries. In addition to this, during the solar system and wind planets the atmosphere problems would straightforward improve. To conclude, it can be analysed form above discussion that albeit only masses can solve the surrounding issues, significance of government and large companies cannot be neglected.
In quick paced era, environment beauty damage is day by day.
Therefore
, it has
been considered
by numerous
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people
that masses can do
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little
to alleviate the atmosphere, whereas
merely
ministry and massive industries can
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make
a real difference. This
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eassy
intends to elaborate why I disagree with this notion in subsequent paragraphs. To embark with, there are multifarious factors how
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
individuals can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the earth surrounding impurities. It is omniscient that nowadays, everyone
The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "holds", "held".
hold
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
vehicles which discharge poisonous gases such as carbon dioxide and monoxide. Which put detrimental impacts not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
environment
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
health of human beings.
For example
, according to the turbine, approximately 75%
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
private transport modes due to this, the whole of zone Lear is rising.
Moreover
, society ought to
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organise
seminar among dwellers. As a fact of this, residents can
easily
aware toward the importance of atmosphere.
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Apartfrom
this, everyone should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
public modes and devote more preference to bicycle for short distance. Probing
further
, human beings should less
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
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plastic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
owing to the fact, these materials are not biodegradable.
“Which” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Which
put inferior effects on the environment.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Today
, the usage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
bags is more popular among community. Individuals do
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
bags in kitchen and shopping purpose after using they adopt thrown away culture policy.
For example
, in Britain,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
bags are band with the assistance of this policy the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Britian
nation is almost pollution free and 80%
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are staying healthy as compared to another countries.
In addition
to this, during the solar system and wind planets the atmosphere problems would straightforward
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
.
To conclude
, it can be
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analysed
form above discussion that albeit
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
masses can solve the surrounding issues, significance of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
and large
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
cannot
be neglected
.
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IELTS essay Many people believe that individuals can do little to improve the environment, only government and large companies can make a real difference.

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