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Nowadays online shopping becomes more popular than store shopping is it a positive or a negative development.

Nowadays online shopping becomes more popular than store shopping is it a positive or a negative development. e8PO7
In this moderan era, the world of all nations growing day by day with the advancement of technology. the trend of purchasing new items from internet for everyone and everywhere. I think that it is possession of stores. there are many reasons behind online and store shopping. I will discuss in forthcoming paragraphs. To embark on, why people like to online shopping. first and foremost, if people do online shopping then they do not waste their precious time with the help of various e-shopping sites. because in this hectic schedule anyone have no enough time to go one by one shop for purchasing anything. Another idea, online websites provides many kinds of products and people can easily select and purchase it as well as, online shopping sites give discount of every item on the other side storekeeper are not provide discount and offers to their customers. On the flip side, one reason is that buy online things, people can buy products directly from national and international. For instance, Flipkart and Amazon etectra, in these days, websites also provide cashback scheme to their customers. However, even if an item is not available in your country then they can buy it from online sites. customer can order online shopping twenty four hours a day available. To recepitulate, it has exaggeration that, there has several advantages of online shopping because websites provide many facilities to their buyer as compare to store shopping.
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the
trend of purchasing new items from internet for everyone and everywhere. I
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think
that it is possession of stores.
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there
are
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many
reasons behind
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online
and store
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shopping
. I will discuss in forthcoming paragraphs.

To embark on, why
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people
like to
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online
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shopping
.
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first
and foremost, if
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people
do
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online
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shopping
then they do not waste their precious time with the
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help
of various e-shopping sites.
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because
in this hectic schedule anyone
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have
no
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enough
time to go one by one shop for purchasing anything. Another
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idea
,
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online
websites
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provides
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many
kinds of products and
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people
can
easily
select and
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purchase
it
as well
as,
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online
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shopping
sites give discount of every item on the other side storekeeper are not
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provide
discount and offers to their customers.

On the flip side, one reason is that
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buy
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online
things,
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people
can
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buy
products
directly
from national and international.
For instance
, Flipkart and Amazon
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etectra
, in these days, websites
also
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provide
cashback scheme to their customers.
However
, even if an item is not available in your country then they can
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buy
it from
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online
sites.
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customer
can order
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online
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shopping
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twenty four
hours a day available.

To
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recepitulate
, it has exaggeration that, there has several advantages of
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online
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shopping
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because
websites
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provide
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many
facilities to their buyer as compare to store
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shopping
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays online shopping becomes more popular than store shopping is it a positive or a negative development.

Essay
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4 paragraphs
239 words
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