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Nowadays, online purchasing are getting viral by means of amenities of technology. There is an growing costumer using technology for satisfying needs. While this has several advantages, I believe that it is an overall negative trend. First of all, it is worth considering, people make use of time well by shopping online. They do not waste time by driving and parking, shopping around and waiting in queue for payment. Instead of these, they are in search of needs online, and get them by one click. Secondly, it is possible to purchase staff from long distance due to online shopping. Costumer can shop online from the companies which are no stores in their near regions. In the last decade, a thousand of people buy staffs via big company like eBay, Amazon. Another point to consider is that people around world are exposed to online fraud. They enter their account information on website for paying online. After a while, some defrauders and hackers may get their personal information and draw money without permission. In addition, buyers' devices may be attacked virus. Research has found that many reclaimants, who report to the police about online defraud, increase gradually. Furthermore, clients complain that quality of products are no good, and they are not same with pictures on network. They also cannot return them because of cargo problems. Finally, clients may indulge in online shopping for pursuit. It makes people shopaholic which may cause crippling psychological issues. To summarise, although it has become more popular for people to shop online for some benefits of saving of time and shopping from long distance, it has brought about too many drawbacks such has online fraud, bad quality and shopping unconsciously.

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