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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

nowadays the students are not taking study seriously because science subject is difficult to learn. some university teaches are very strictly. In science subject their are so many formulas and chemical etc. Students dnot want to do study that’s they avoid science subject. I think science subject is good for students it give so many information and make our life healthy.
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science
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is difficult to learn.
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science
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many
formulas and chemical etc. Students
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science
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subject
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science
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is
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good
for students it
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IELTS essay Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
61 words
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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