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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

nowadays the students are not taking study seriously because science subject is difficult to learn. some university teaches are very strictly. In science subject their are so many formulas and chemical etc. Students dnot want to do study that’s they avoid science subject. I think science subject is good for students it give so many information and make our life healthy.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Nowadays
nowadays
 the students are not taking study seriously
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationarttechniquesystemlearning
science
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexposedsusceptibleconditionalaccountableaptsensitive
subject
 is difficult to learn. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Some
some
 university teaches are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
strictly
. In You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationarttechniquesystemlearning
science
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexposedsusceptibleconditionalaccountableaptsensitive
subject
Did you mean “there”?there
their
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 formulas and chemical etc. Students Possible spelling mistake found.notdotknotsnotDNTDOT
dnot
 want to do study that’s they avoid You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationarttechniquesystemlearning
science
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexposedsusceptibleconditionalaccountableaptsensitive
subject
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationarttechniquesystemlearning
science
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexposedsusceptibleconditionalaccountableaptsensitive
subject
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for students it After ‘it’, use the third-person verb form “gives”.gives
give
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: “much information”, “a good deal of information”.much informationa good deal of information
many information
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 our life healthy. 