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Topic 2: University students always focus on one specialist subject, but some people think universities should encourage their students to study a range of subjects in addition to their own subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

today era, university are very important part of our students. In university students learn many things. I am agree that university encourage their students to study range of subjects in addition to their own subjects. In university teachers are very helpful and their nature very friendly. In university some students are very important but they have no money but university helping the students they give scholarship to the students. All conclusion university are best for studies.
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IELTS essay Topic 2: University students always focus on one specialist subject, but some people think universities should encourage their students to study a range of subjects in addition to their own subject.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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