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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, neighbors depend on each other less than people in the past.

Nowadays, neighbors depend on each other less than people in the past. Lr3mG
Neighbors never fail to help us when we are in need. The reason why people hold the view that neighbors depend less on each other is beyond me. In my perspective, it is the harmonious neighborhood that leads to our happy daily lives and I would explore only two primary ones here. The main reason for my propensity is that neighbors are always available for help, especially when we are in need. As a saying goes, water afar quenches no fire. It means that people afar, even your best friends or relatives, can't offer you timely help, but the people nearby, maybe strangers, could provide prompt. . .
Neighbors never fail to
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us when we are in need. The reason why
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people
hold the view that neighbors depend less on each other is beyond me. In my perspective, it is the harmonious neighborhood that leads to our happy daily
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and I would explore
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two primary ones here.

The main reason for my propensity is that neighbors are always available for
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help
,
especially
when we are in need. As a saying goes, water afar quenches no fire. It means that
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people
afar, even your best friends or relatives, can't offer you timely
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help
,
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the
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nearby, maybe strangers, could provide prompt.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, neighbors depend on each other less than people in the past.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
108 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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