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At present, plenty of people are moving forward from their families and friends because of the work. Here, I will explain the merits and demerits in further paragraphs. To begin with, there is an abundance of the reasons why citizens are staying away from their relatives and peers. The prime one is to get excellent opportunities. To elaborate, there are several people in this world, who are moving abroad or somewhere else to find their suitable jobs, which is fulfill their essential needs and living luxurious lifestyle. Hence, It may have indirectly helped them, who an ambition to achieve something in their life because when they are out of their realm, it makes them more durable and unbreakable. For example, the time of India reveals that many communities are moved to somewhere for finding their dream jobs. The ratio of migrating people has increased from 10 to 29 percent in the last ten years. Secondly, there is a plethora of advantages to move another place. When people are migrating overseas that is helping them to get flexible paid jobs as well as equality of rights. Additionally, The rivalry is too high in outside countries. Consequently, It will be air to get more knowledge and make us to the greatest competitors like gain in personality, speak variety of languages, etc. For instance, The New York magazine survey expose that the research carried out 1 million humans are moved to the western countries for learning about new skills in one decade. On the other hand, there is also having some demerits related moving ahead from comrade and relatives. The crowds are felt less socially with their proximity relatives. Moreover, The people might lose their crucial relation because of earning more money and adopt western cultures. To conclude, Every circumstance has two sides, but it has depended on them, how they used it correct way. I recommended, moving further is the greatest way for living because it teaches us how to do deal with troubles.

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