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New life made by a lockdown.

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The government imposed a lockdown in my neighborhood for 21 days owing to having numerous affected cases. During quarantine people in the area had to wear masks whenever being out of home in order to prevent contagion from being more serious. In this case, we're very reluctant to communicate with others. In addition, a hand sanitizer was indispensable for each to keep us hygienic every time. Thus, the feeling of suspense gradually declined and we impartially became more adapted to new lifestyles for sustain health.
The
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government
imposed a lockdown in my neighborhood for 21 days owing to having numerous
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
cases. During quarantine
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in the area had to wear masks whenever being out of home in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
contagion from being more serious.
In this case
, we're
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very
reluctant to communicate with others.
In addition
, a hand sanitizer was indispensable for each to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
us hygienic every time.
Thus
, the feeling of suspense
gradually
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
declined and
we
impartially
became more adapted to new lifestyles for sustain health.

IELTS essay New life made by a lockdown.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
85 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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