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Nowadays, more and more people use online shopping. Some people think it is a good development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, more and more people use online shopping. Some people think it is a good development. bbA5X
In the age of technology, online shopping has been woven into our life and is spreading out at an unprecedented rate. It is a common belief that it is a good development and I also firmly that purchasing online brings huge advantages for not only sellers but also consumers. To begin with, the trend of online shopping plattform. The sellers can open an online shop now easier than ever before. Only by creating an account on social network or E-Commerce Exchange such as: Facebook, Instagram, shopee, lazada, …ect, the sellers are able to take part in the community of online purchase. Moreover, selling product online also help the sellers to save money on space rent.
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shopping has
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good
development and I
also
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that purchasing
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online
brings huge advantages for not
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sellers
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also
consumers.

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begin
with, the trend of
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shopping
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plattform
. The
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sellers
can open an
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online
shop
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now
easier than ever
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before
.
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Only
by creating an account on social network or E-Commerce Exchange such as: Facebook, Instagram,
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shopee
,
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lazada
, …
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, the
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sellers
are able to
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take part
in the community of
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online
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purchase
.
Moreover
, selling product
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online
also
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help
the
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sellers
to save money on space rent.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, more and more people use online shopping. Some people think it is a good development.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
115 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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