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Nowadays more and more people have access to the internet. But constant availability of any information worsens people's memory and critical thinking skills . To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays more and more people have access to the internet. But constant availability of any information worsens people's memory and critical thinking skills. AE63
In present so many metropolitan are using a highly accesss to the internet. There is an ongoing debate Whether people are constant availability not looking at all the aspects. I'm in partical accord. To worsens the memory and critical thinking skills. Different factor have influence my stand in this matter. Out of the several observation the first which come to my mind is that people working in computer as well as mobiles. Technologies is good for used to short used but people still around full hours used in access to the internet. This view exist because constant availability of internet it's a worsens to people mind and metropolitan area people are highly angry behavior. Further more, we can not ignore the reality that many student are using the internet access it's not showing a good but many time showing to noud video. This reason is Buoyed in the fact that student are not focusing on his work even studies. Consequently people are full depends on technology last one decades survey of calculate 60℅ students are used calculate. Moreover, everyone notice that internet is a good sources of technology. Every person are access to internet even more facility are available in net. This factor is taken in to account as nowadays all work essgest way for internet so many people doing a great job as well business to the internet. Therefore, internet browing is very useful life style. Apart from this the fact that now YouTube is more common purpose used. Can be also cited in support. This hypothesis is consequences of people essay to watching some videos. And learn and development new skills. The fact that 89℅ of people using regular the internet access. In the Forgebale future internet access is great deal to universe. It would be fortunate for technology. It is vital to people are self motivated to time vise used internet.
In present
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so
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many
metropolitan are using a
highly
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accesss
to the internet. There is an ongoing debate Whether
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people
are constant availability not looking at all the aspects. I'm in
Possible spelling mistake found.
partical
accord. To worsens the memory and critical thinking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.

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Different
factor have influence my stand in this matter. Out of the
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several observation
the
first
which
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come
to my mind is that
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people
working in computer
as well
as mobiles.
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Technologies
You should probably use: "are" or "were".
is
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good
for
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used
to short
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used
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but
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people
still
around full hours
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used
in
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access
to the internet. This view exist
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because
constant availability of internet it's a worsens to
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people
mind and metropolitan area
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people
are
The extreme adjective for angry is "furious".
highly angry
behavior.
Further
more, we can not
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ignore
the reality that
Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: "many students".
many student
are using the internet
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access
it's not showing a
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good
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but
Did you mean "many times" or "much time"?
many time
showing to
Possible spelling mistake found.
noud
video. This reason
is Buoyed
in the fact
The verb 'are' is plural. Did you mean: "that student is"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?
that student are
not focusing on his work even studies.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Consequently
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people
are full depends on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technology
last one decades survey of calculate 60℅ students are
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used
calculate.

Moreover
, everyone
The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "notices", "noticed".
notice
that internet is a
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good
sources of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technology
. Every person are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
access
to internet even more facility are available in net. This factor
is taken
in to account as nowadays all work
Possible spelling mistake found.
essgest
way for internet
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so
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many
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people
doing a great job
as well
business to the internet.
Therefore
, internet
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browing
is
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very
useful life style. Apart from this the fact that
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now
YouTube is more common purpose
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
. Can be
also
cited in support. This hypothesis is consequences of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
essay to watching
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
videos. And learn and development new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. The fact that 89℅ of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
using regular the internet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
access
. In the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Forgebale
future internet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
access
is great deal to universe. It would be fortunate for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technology
. It is vital to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
self motivated
to time vise
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
internet.
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IELTS essay Nowadays more and more people have access to the internet. But constant availability of any information worsens people's memory and critical thinking skills.

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