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Nowadays, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world

Nowadays, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world MrG3Q
Today, millions of tons of food are wasted around the world because food is ubiquitous on a global scale. The most important reason why food prices are easily wasted is because of high access to technical advances in farming. Therefore, an increase in output leads to a decrease in food prices. Another reason is that many people often have sketchy or even no plans when it comes to buying and stocking food. This means that the food supply is so abundant that people don't need to think and plan carefully about buying and stocking up on daily food, especially fresh food. As a result, food can go rancid and must be thrown away immediately. In conclusion, food waste is generally caused by low food costs and poor planning before purchasing any food.
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prices.

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have sketchy or even no plans when it
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supply is
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abundant that
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don't need to
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think
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,
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can go rancid and
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waste is
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costs and poor planning
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IELTS essay Nowadays, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world

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