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Nowadays, media has been playing important role in changing the people mind. What are the positives and negative impact of widespread media usage?

Nowadays, media has been playing important role in changing the people mind. What are the positives and negative impact of widespread media usage? g50rD
In the current scenario, vernacular plays a pivotal role to change the human perception. There are several fruitful and detriment outcomes of overuse of press. Both the questions are answered furthered in the ensuing paragraphs. Discussing the merits, the most rewarding one is, person can get the hourly update the news. This is to say that, they can be in the connection of regular current affairs not only about their own nation but also to overseas. For instance, with the help of World Wide Web now any news related to foreign countries can easily be accessed by the home nation without visiting there. Besides this, the media provides a variety of news as well as entertainment. To elaborate, one can access the updates about any political leaders, sportsmen, scientists, games and many more. Thus, the horizons are broadening and all age group can select their preference as per their mentality. As each and every thing has two sides, the same is with overuse of media too, having said that. The most dangerous one is the getting the false news. To re frame this, there are many sources which update the news by copying the blogs updated by the laymen without checking the authentication. As a result, there will be a dilemma to select which source is correct or incorrect. Along with this, certain bad news creates negative influences on human brains. In other words, the media news channels continuously showing the violence, terrorist attack and bomb blast can threaten the general public. For instance, as per recent survey by the “Times of India” newspaper published that five people out of ten become a victim of heart attack just to see the current pandemic situation all over the globe. To end up discussion, it is true that the delivering the information to humans have a greater impact on their brains. Despite the fact that, there are certain darker sides such as dubious information and panic problem; on the other hand, the positive outcomes such as regular updates and form of entertainment.
In the
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current
scenario, vernacular plays a pivotal role to
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change
the human perception. There are several fruitful and detriment outcomes of overuse of press. Both the questions
are answered
furthered in the ensuing paragraphs.

Discussing the merits, the most rewarding one is, person can
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get
the hourly
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update
the
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news
. This is to say that, they can be in the connection of regular
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current
affairs not
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only
about their
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own
nation
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but
also
to overseas.
For instance
, with the
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help
of World Wide Web
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now
any
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news
related to foreign countries can
easily
be accessed
by the home nation without visiting there.
Besides
this, the media provides a variety of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
as well
as entertainment. To elaborate, one can access the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
updates
about any political leaders, sportsmen, scientists, games and
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many
more.
Thus
, the horizons are broadening and all age group can select their preference as per their mentality.

As each and every thing has two sides, the same is with overuse of media too, having said that. The most
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dangerous
one is the getting the false
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
. To re frame this, there are
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many
sources which
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
update
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
by copying the blogs updated by the laymen without checking the authentication.
As a result
, there will be a dilemma to select which source is correct or incorrect. Along with this, certain
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bad
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news
creates
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negative
influences on human brains.
In other words
, the media
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news
channels
continuously
showing the violence, terrorist attack and bomb blast can threaten the
Consider using "public".
general public
.
For instance
, as per recent survey by the “Times of India” newspaper published that five
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people
out of ten become a victim of heart attack
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just
to
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see
the
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current
pandemic situation all over the globe.

To
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end
up discussion, it is true that the delivering the information to humans have a greater impact on their brains. Despite the fact that, there are certain darker sides such as dubious information and panic problem;
on the other hand
, the
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positive
outcomes such as regular
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updates
and form of entertainment.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, media has been playing important role in changing the people mind. What are the positives and negative impact of widespread media usage?

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4 paragraphs
340 words
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