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Describe a time when you had some medicine ?

Describe a time when you had some medicine? VBg5O

It is commonly said that prevention is better than cure. although o believe in idea of prevention, there are still some affliction which can not be prevented because they strike unannounced for such eilments be have medicines I agree that supplement are greatest invention of mankind. pills in power us to fight many threats which could be otherwise debilitating for us I can personally bouch for it since recently I went throw one such harrowing experience I vividly remember it was the time of January 1000 people suffered these stone pain and 3 years ago I was one of the unfortunate victim. it started when me and my family about to sleep I suffered from unbearable pain so my family took may to the hospital due to night doctor were unable to treat me but nurses at night shift treated me. hospital staff injected the injection to bring pain in under control after that they put Ivdrip in my nerves

It is commonly
 said that prevention is better than cure. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAlthough
although
 o believe in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 of prevention, there are still
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 affliction which can not be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :precluded
prevented
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they strike unannounced for such Possible spelling mistake found.ailmentsaliments
eilments
 be have medicines I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that supplement are A determiner is probably missing here: "the greatest".the greatest
greatest
 invention of mankind. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPills
pills
 in power us to fight This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 threats which could be otherwise
 debilitating for us I can personally
 bouch for it since recently I went throw one such harrowing experience I vividly
 remember it was the time of January 1000 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 suffered these stone pain and 3 years ago I was one of the unfortunate victim. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 when me and my family about to sleep I suffered from unbearable pain This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 my family took may to the hospital due to night doctor were unable to treat me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 nurses at night shift treated me. hospital staff injected the injection to bring pain in under control after that they put Possible spelling mistake found.Iv drip
Ivdrip
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