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Nowadays may famous companies sponsor sports events and sports players. Do the advantages for the event and its players outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays may famous companies sponsor sports events and sports players. Do the advantages for the event and its players outweigh the disadvantages? lRNO1

An individual sports player or even sports events are being sponsored by famous companies. The positive approach of this event is bolder than its disadvantages. Having seen the advertisement growing within events shows how it has become a regular happening in sports. Definitely must have caught our attention where our favorite sports team has worn a specific brand every time. This advantage has two sides where both achieve fame and popularity among people. Secondly, the player gets paid a good amount of money and brings a good sell for the company, which offers not only money but from T-shirts to shoes to the player. There is a slight disadvantage for this two-side contract. If only one of them hits a low and gets disapproved by humankind then with no doubt this affects the other. No matter, if the player only wore that shoe on a match and then it appeared not to have a good quality, the player would be blamed. Think about offering sponsorship to a player who got infamous afterward, how unfortunate that could be. In conclusion, the disadvantages are not that common and can be prevented only by a background check. Where it can bring financial support and fame for the team and its sponsor.

An individual sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
 or even sports This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 are being sponsored
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famous
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companies
. The This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
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event
 is bolder than its disadvantages. Having This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
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events
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 how it has become a regular happening in sports.

Definitely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 have caught our attention where our favorite sports team has worn a specific brand every time. This advantage has two sides where both achieve fame and popularity among This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Secondly
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
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gets
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good
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good
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company
, which offers not You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalone
only
 money This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 from T-shirts to shoes to the player.

There is a slight disadvantage for this two-side contract. If You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalone
only
 one of them hits a low and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 disapproved by humankind then with no doubt this affects the other. No matter, if the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalone
only
 wore that shoe on a match and then it appeared not to have a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 quality, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
 would be blamed
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
Think
 about offering sponsorship to a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 infamous afterward, how unfortunate that could be.

In conclusion
, the disadvantages are not that common and can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :precluded
prevented
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalone
only
 by a background This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
. Where it can bring financial support and fame for the team and its sponsor. 