Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their courses in foreign countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?

Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their courses in foreign countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad? AaPlM
Recent years, This is partly because people are more affluent and partly due to the variety of grants and scholarships which are available for overseas students nowadays. Although foreign study is not something which every student would choose. Firstly, it may give students access to knowledge and facilities such as laboratories and libraries which are not available in their home country. By looking abroad students may find a wider range of courses than those offered in their country’s universities, and therefore one which fits more closely to their particular requirements. Studying abroad has a number of drawbacks. These may be divided into personal and professional. Firstly, students have to leave their family and friends for a long period. Study abroad is almost always more expensive that studying in one’s local university. The disadvantages of studying abroad are usually temporary in nature. Students who study abroad generally become proficient in the language quite soon and they are only away from their family and friends for a year or two. What is more, many of the benefits last students all their lives and make them highly desirable to prospective employers.
Recent years, This is partly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are more affluent and partly due to the variety of grants and scholarships which are available for overseas
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
nowadays.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
foreign study is not something which every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
would choose.

Firstly
, it may give
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
access to knowledge and facilities such as laboratories and libraries which are not available in their home country. By looking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
may find a wider range of courses than those offered in their country’s universities, and
therefore
one which fits more
closely
to their particular requirements.

Studying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
has a number of drawbacks. These may
be divided
into personal and professional.
Firstly
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
their family and friends for a long period. Study
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
is almost always more expensive that studying in one’s local university.

The disadvantages of studying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
are
usually
temporary in nature.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Students
who study
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
generally
become proficient in the language quite
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
soon and
they are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
away from their family and friends for a year or two.
What is more
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
of the benefits last
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
all their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them
highly
desirable to prospective employers.

IELTS essay Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their courses in foreign countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
188 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their courses in foreign countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?