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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries

Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries neWD7

In the world nowadays many people opine that. In recent decades majority people are traveling foreign countries. From my point of view this is super because people become fit to get rid of boredom and excessive stress through travel. Thus the advantages for outweigh the disadvantages. On the one hand revenue to the state budget due to tourists. The cause of this that wayfers use state hotels as well as buy a lot of things. To this day some workers by means of travellers activity. Financial orianted trampers only benefit the state. On the other hand tourists hazardous to nature. Because they can dispose of waste without putting it in the wastebasket. As a consequence can harm to nature. This can make it worse. In conclusion, I would argue that the benefits of travel outweigh the drawbacks.

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 they can dispose of waste without putting it in the wastebasket. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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 a consequence can harm to nature. This can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
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, I would argue that the benefits of travel outweigh the drawbacks. 