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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. WaGk
Due to globalisation and enhancement of technologies, travelling is become cheaper and safer due to which a number of visitors are wishing to visit it to rest places of other Nations. These results into positive growth for tourism sector in worldwide. Still some people argue that such trend may have adverse impact on countries in which they travel to. Honestly not agree with this view Tourism always helps to strength up the nation's economy. It provides employment and various business opportunity to local people when we visit any tourist place it will become a chance to earn money for tour operators and also for local citizens, who lives nearby tourist places and manufacturing local handcrafts. Secondly tourism will helps to develop high class Infrastructures and other facilities like five star hotels or pubs and sports zones. Lastly it will also help to improve local public transportation on famous visitor places like establishing rail, bus or flight connectivity. Recently Kevadiya which is famous place due to the Statue of Sardar Vallabhbhai Patel is now connected with the rail network. However persons who are in opposition they say that although it have vast positive effects but it has a cons as well. This is that it will impact eco-friendly zones of famous places. to provide world class facilities to tourists needs majority of land which can only be achieved by cutting down the trees moreover sometimes tourist unnecessary needs may to encourage some illegal activities like drugs and sex rackets are local citizens are becoming victim of it which may have a negative impact on local community Daman and Goa are the examples where are numerous illegal activities are being observed in tourist season. Lastly to covid-19 pandemic local people are being affected by virus due to outside tourist. This affects their Healthy lifestyle. To conclude I would like to say that tourism two other countries has both side like with strict actions negative can be waived out.
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Due
to
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globalisation
and enhancement of technologies, travelling
is become
cheaper and safer
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due
to which a number of visitors
The verb 'wishing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are wishing
to visit it to rest
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places
of other Nations. These results into
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positive
growth for tourism sector in worldwide.
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Still
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some
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people
argue that such trend may have adverse impact on countries in which they travel to.
Honestly
not
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agree
with this
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view


Tourism always
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helps
to strength up the nation's economy. It provides employment and various business opportunity to
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local
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people
when we visit any
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tourist
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place
it will become a chance to earn money for tour operators and
also
for
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local
citizens, who
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lives
nearby
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tourist
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places
and manufacturing
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local
handcrafts.
Secondly
tourism will
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helps
to develop high
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class
Infrastructures and other facilities like
'five star' is missing a hyphen.
five star
hotels or pubs and sports zones.
Lastly
it will
also
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help
to
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improve
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local
public transportation on
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famous
visitor
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places
like establishing rail, bus or flight connectivity. Recently
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Kevadiya
which is
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famous
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place
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due
to the Statue of
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Sardar
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Vallabhbhai
Patel is
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now
connected with the rail network.

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However
persons who are in opposition they say that although it
Did you mean "has"?
have
vast
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positive
effects
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but
it has
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a con" or simply "cons"?
a cons
as well
. This is that it will impact eco-friendly zones of
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famous
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places
.
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to
provide world
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class
facilities to
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tourists
needs
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majority of
land which can
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only
be achieved
by cutting down the trees
moreover
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sometimes
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tourist
unnecessary needs may to encourage
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some
illegal activities like drugs and sex rackets are
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local
citizens are becoming victim of it which may have a
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negative
impact on
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local
community
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Daman
and Goa are the examples where are numerous illegal activities are
being observed
in
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tourist
season.
Lastly
to
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid-19
pandemic
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local
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people
are being
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affected
by virus
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due
to outside
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tourist
. This affects their Healthy lifestyle.

To conclude
I would like to say that tourism two other countries has both side like with strict actions
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
can
be waived
out.

IELTS essay Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to.

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