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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some people believed that this travel has a negative impact on the countries travel to . To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some people believed that this travel has a negative impact on the countries travel to. PmaK
More and more people today are choosing to travel internationally. This positive development is mainly because of a rise in middle class income coupled with advances in aviation. People today can afford to travel as it has become more convenient. The last half century has seen wages in both developed and developing companies climb with the concomitant expansion of the global middle class. Workers have the disposable income to travel that they lacked in the past. This has been complemented with safer airplanes so individuals are not afraid to fly. Airfares have also become cheaper as companies like Boeing produce more efficient planes, competition intensifies between competing airlines, and the supply more than meets demand for flights. These factors combined have spawned a golden age of international travel. Looking at the opportunity in perspective, it is hard to see the advent of international travel as anything less than one of mankind’s greatest achievements. For the entirety of human history, most people lived and died near to where they were born. Anyone who wanted to travel to another country had to possess enourmous wealth, time, and courage. Today, the average employee can save up and travel to see the wonders of the Rennaissance in Southern Europe, the vast monuments to history and modernity in China, or explore any other corner of Earth that has piqued their interest. This is an unprecedented opportunity unavailable to past generations. In conclusion, international travel is a byproduct of the modern age and we should all be grateful for its possibility. There are clear environmental drawbacks but those should not blind people to its benefits taken as a whole.
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of a rise in middle
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income coupled with advances in aviation.

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People
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today
can afford to
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as it has become more convenient. The last half century has
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seen
wages in both developed and developing
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companies
climb with the concomitant expansion of the global middle
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class
. Workers have the disposable income to
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travel
that they lacked in the past. This has
been complemented
with safer airplanes
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individuals are not afraid to
fly
. Airfares have
also
become cheaper as
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companies
like Boeing produce more efficient
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, competition intensifies between competing airlines, and the supply more than meets demand for flights. These factors combined have spawned a golden age of international travel.

Looking at the opportunity in perspective, it is
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hard
to
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see
the advent of international
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as anything less than one of mankind’s greatest achievements. For the entirety of human history, most
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people
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lived
and
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died
near to where they
were born
. Anyone who wanted to
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travel
to another country had to possess
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enourmous
wealth, time, and courage.
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, the average employee can save up and
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travel
to
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the wonders of the
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Rennaissance
in Southern Europe, the vast monuments to history and modernity in China, or explore any other corner of Earth that has piqued their interest. This is an unprecedented opportunity unavailable to past generations.

In conclusion
, international
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travel
is a byproduct of the modern
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age and
we should all be grateful for its possibility. There are
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clear
environmental drawbacks
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those should not blind
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people
to its benefits taken as a whole.

IELTS essay Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some people believed that this travel has a negative impact on the countries travel to.

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4 paragraphs
273 words
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