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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to.

Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. 92b0

I disagree that travelling to foreign countries for pleasure has nagative impact on the countries travelled to. I feel as an individual travelling is very important, it gives you an oppertunity to experience different cultures, foods, climate which could be very different from where you are born and brought up. Tourisum is very important factor in determining the financial success of the country, because it impacts diffent sectors of the economy like aviation, hotels management, historic places developement. If individuals are travelling to foreign countries this will give boost to the aviation industry because people will buy tickets, it will give boost to hotels as individuals will stay and they will go shopping, use public transport and will buy soveniors. so overoll it creates jobs for a lot of jobs for local people. there are some places in india which are existing only because of its tourisum like kerla for its senic beauty, kashmir for its mountains and goa for its beaches. hence i feel tourism is crutial and important for any country.

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countries
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nagative
 impact on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
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very
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important
, it gives you an Possible spelling mistake found.opportunity
oppertunity
 to experience This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 cultures, foods, climate which could be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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different
 from where you are born
 and brought up.

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Tourisum
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very
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important
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country
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because
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diffent
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developement
. If individuals are travelling to foreign You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 this will give boost to the aviation industry This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 tickets, it will give boost to hotels as individuals will Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).stay, and
stay and
 they will go shopping, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 public transport and will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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soveniors
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
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overoll
 it creates jobs for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 jobs for local This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
.

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there
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 places in Possible spelling mistake found.IndiaINDIAIndianindieIndiraIndra
india
 which are existing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of its Possible spelling mistake found.tourism
tourisum
 like Possible spelling mistake found.KarlaKerala
kerla
 for its Possible spelling mistake found.scenicsonic
senic
 beauty, Possible spelling mistake found.KashmirKashmirs
kashmir
 for its mountains and Possible spelling mistake found.GoagogotgoalGodgod
goa
 for its beaches. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?hence,
hence
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i
 feel tourism is Possible spelling mistake found.crucial
crutial
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for any You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
. 