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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to.

Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. 92b0
I disagree that travelling to foreign countries for pleasure has nagative impact on the countries travelled to. I feel as an individual travelling is very important, it gives you an oppertunity to experience different cultures, foods, climate which could be very different from where you are born and brought up. Tourisum is very important factor in determining the financial success of the country, because it impacts diffent sectors of the economy like aviation, hotels management, historic places developement. If individuals are travelling to foreign countries this will give boost to the aviation industry because people will buy tickets, it will give boost to hotels as individuals will stay and they will go shopping, use public transport and will buy soveniors. so overoll it creates jobs for a lot of jobs for local people. there are some places in india which are existing only because of its tourisum like kerla for its senic beauty, kashmir for its mountains and goa for its beaches. hence i feel tourism is crutial and important for any country.
I disagree that travelling to foreign
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for pleasure has
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nagative
impact on the
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travelled to. I feel as an individual travelling is
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very
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important
, it gives you an
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oppertunity
to experience
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different
cultures, foods, climate which could be
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very
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different
from where you
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Tourisum
is
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very
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important
factor in determining the financial success of the
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country
,
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because
it impacts
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diffent
sectors of the economy like aviation, hotels management, historic places
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developement
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countries
this will give boost to the aviation industry
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because
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people
will
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buy
tickets, it will give boost to hotels as individuals will
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stay and
they will go shopping,
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use
public transport and will
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buy
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soveniors
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so
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overoll
it creates jobs for
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jobs for local
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people
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there
are
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some
places in
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india
which are existing
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only
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because
of its
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tourisum
like
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kerla
for its
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senic
beauty,
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kashmir
for its mountains and
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goa
for its beaches.
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hence
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feel tourism is
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crutial
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IELTS essay Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to.

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3 paragraphs
173 words
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