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Nowadays many people get the reading news online instead of reading newspaper or watching TV. Discuss the positive or negative devlopment

Nowadays many people get the reading news online instead of reading newspaper or watching TV. Discuss the positive or negative devlopment J37ja
These days various people acquire the scan news on internet alternatively of reading newspaper and also watching platform is television. I believe that the most of people spend more time on the television as well as reading newspaper. In my point of view, I believe that the newspaper is an authentic source of information. People are more likely to be responsible when they are writing news. In addition to that newspaper improve the language of the society. News writers are masters in their language field. As a result, the people knowledge of various language improved over time of period. Moreover, they have dedicated childern, which is proven to improve language abilities. Also have TV channels, they are also bonded by rule and regulations. One the other hand, However, news is also on the internet but sometimes the writers have only target to catch the viewer quick intention on news. Online communication controlling because it is effective to reach the folk within a short time. In conclusion, online news tough to gaining popularity and due to the folk reach to the reader and also have less content. Nevertheless, they are not providing authentic information such as newspaper and television.
These days various
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acquire the scan
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on internet
alternatively
of reading
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newspaper
and
also
watching platform is television. I believe that the most of
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people
spend more time on the television
as well
as reading
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newspaper
. In my point of view, I believe that the
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newspaper
is an authentic source of information.
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People
are more likely to be responsible when they are writing
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news
.
In addition
to that
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newspaper
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improve
the
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language
of the society.
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News
writers are masters in their
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language
field.
As a result
, the
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people
knowledge of various
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language
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improved
over time of period.
Moreover
, they have dedicated
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childern
, which
is proven
to
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improve
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language
abilities.
Also
have TV channels, they are
also
bonded by
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rule
and regulations.
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One
the other hand,
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,
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news
is
also
on the internet
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sometimes
the writers have
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target
to catch the viewer quick intention on
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news
. Online communication controlling
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because
it is effective to reach the folk within a short time.
In conclusion
, online
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news
tough to gaining popularity and due to the folk reach to the reader and
also
have less content.
Nevertheless
, they are not providing authentic information such as
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newspaper
and television.
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IELTS essay Nowadays many people get the reading news online instead of reading newspaper or watching TV. Discuss the positive or negative devlopment

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