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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problem can be lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problem can be lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep? YA0Q
In this competitive word people nowadays are complaining that they are facing some difficulties to get enough sleep. Thus this cause lack of sleep. There are two major reasons behind this problem. All these will be discussed in the course of this essay along with possible solutions that can be taken to deal with this issue before reaching conclusion. One of the major reasons that will cause if there will be less sleep that is concentration. Focusing on something while performing any kind of task wheather it is related to office work or school work or any other thing, if there will be no concentration people will going to suffer and individuals will face problems. In other words if a student do not focus on studies then this will create an issue which will lead to fail in their exams. Secondly, the problem will be related to people physical and mental health. They will be more fatigue and burden on themselves which will lead to create sickness in the body. In order to deal with problem certain steps needs to be taken. Firstly, people should start maintaining their work life. Once the life becomes balance people start feeling positive and active which will help them to concentrate more and they will perform each task properly. Another recomended solution for avoiding this lack of sleep issue is people should stop watching television late night and also put a pause of spending to much time on social media in night. The more they focus of good sleep, the more people will be physically and mentally fit. To reiterate, undoubtedly, people are facing this lack of sleep problem and because of this issue individuals are getting effected like having illness issue, however, this still can be resolved only by having good number of sleep hours which can be done once people start focusing on life.
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this cause lack of
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sleep
. There are two major reasons behind this
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problem
. All these will
be discussed
in the course of this essay along with possible solutions that can
be taken
to deal with this
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issue
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before
reaching conclusion.

One of the major reasons that will cause if there will be less
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sleep
that is
concentration. Focusing on something while performing any kind of task
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wheather
it
is related
to office work or school work or any other thing, if there will be no concentration
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people
will going to suffer and individuals will face
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problems
.
In other words
if a student do not focus on studies then this will create an
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issue
which will lead to fail in their exams.
Secondly
, the
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will
be related
to
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people
physical and mental health. They will be more fatigue and burden on themselves which will lead to create sickness in the body.

In order to deal with
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certain steps needs to
be taken
.
Firstly
,
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people
should
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start
maintaining their work life. Once the life becomes balance
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people
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start
feeling
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positive
and active which will
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them to concentrate
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more and
they will perform each task
properly
. Another
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recomended
solution for avoiding this lack of
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sleep
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issue
is
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people
should
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stop
watching television late night and
also
put a pause of spending
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much time on social media in night. The more they focus of
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good
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sleep
, the more
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will be
physically
and mentally fit.

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undoubtedly
,
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people
are facing this lack of
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sleep
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problem
and
because of this
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issue
individuals are getting effected like having illness
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issue
,
however
, this
still
can
be resolved
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by having
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good
number of
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hours which can
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once
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people
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start
focusing on life.
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IELTS essay Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problem can be lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
312 words
5.5
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