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Nowadays, many people argue that working in a group is more effective than working alone. Discuss and give your opinion.

Nowadays, many people argue that working in a group is more effective than working alone. Discuss and give your opinion. N8N7m
Populations have different views about working styles. Some people prefer working in a team while others work independently. I strong believe that both teamwork and work independently are effective because of the following reasons. There is no doubt that working in a work has benefits significantly. To begin with, in a team, the leader plays an important role in working assignment for each member. As a result, the task is done quickly and effectively. It’s also reduces high pressure in heavy jobs of members in a group. Another advantage of teamwork is that it encourages individual to give great idea when discussing issue to find the best choice. Because different people have different ways of thinking, thus, working with different members in the group that brings different way to solve a problem. Finally, teamwork environment is a wonderful way in order to upgrade communication skills and interaction skills. Thanks to that, each member can learn a lot from other teammates. It cannot be denied that working alone has strong points. First of all, work people are more focused on their work. When they work alone on a project, they put all of their mind into it which helps them finish their task quickly. Secondly, they could develop their own skills such as self-motivation, self-awareness and self-management. Therefore, they could become their own boss. Last but not least, by working alone, they can easily make a decision because they do not depend on anyone’s opinions, ideas, or suggestions. In conclusion, for all the reasons mentioned above, I personally believe that both individual and team working styles bring certain benefits and results. Which working style is better, it depends on perfective and personality of each worker.
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different
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people
prefer
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working
in a team while others
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work
independently
. I strong
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believe
that both teamwork and
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work
independently
are effective
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because
of the following reasons.

There is no doubt that
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working
in a
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work
has benefits
significantly
. To
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begin
with, in a team, the leader plays an
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important
role in
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working
assignment for each
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member
.
As a result
, the task
is done
quickly
and
effectively
. It’s
also
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reduces
high pressure in heavy jobs of
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members
in a group. Another advantage of teamwork is that it encourages individual to give great
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idea
when discussing issue to find the best choice.
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Because
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different
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people
have
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different
ways of thinking,
thus
,
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working
with
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different
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members
in the group that brings
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different
way to solve a problem.
Finally
, teamwork environment is a wonderful way in order to upgrade communication
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skills
and interaction
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skills
. Thanks to that, each
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member
can learn a lot from other teammates.

It cannot
be denied
that
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working
alone has strong points.
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First of all
,
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work
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people
are more focused on their
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work
. When they
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work
alone on a project, they put all of their mind into it which
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helps
them finish their task
quickly
.
Secondly
, they could develop their
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own
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skills
such as self-motivation, self-awareness and self-management.
Therefore
, they could become their
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own
boss. Last
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but
not least, by
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working
alone, they can
easily
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make
a decision
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because
they do not depend on anyone’s opinions,
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ideas
, or suggestions.

In conclusion
, for all the reasons mentioned above, I
personally
believe that both individual and team
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working
styles bring certain benefits and results. Which
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style is better, it depends on
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perfective
and personality of each worker.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, many people argue that working in a group is more effective than working alone. Discuss and give your opinion.

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