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nowadays many jobs are more stressfull and the working day is longer what are the reason for this

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Imbalance in work and personal life is a common phenomenon in the modern world. Stress related to long work hours and jobs are the major problem. It plays major role in jobs and long working hours. this essay will discuss some key reasons behind this increasing anxiety regarding work life. There are several factors that cause stress and anxiety to the employees, one of the major fact is replacement. company replaces the employees and hiring new one for the purpose of lowering management. For instance, in covid year many of employees are firing due to lack of work.
Imbalance in
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and personal life is a common phenomenon in the modern world.
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related to long
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hours and jobs are the major problem. It plays major role in jobs and long working hours.
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this
essay will discuss
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key reasons behind this increasing anxiety regarding
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life. There are several factors that cause
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stress
and anxiety to the employees, one of the major fact is replacement.
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company
replaces the employees and hiring new one for the purpose of lowering management.
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year
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of employees are firing due to lack of
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IELTS essay nowadays many jobs are more stressfull and the working day is longer what are the reason for this

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  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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