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Nowadays many jobs are more stressful and the working day is longer. What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to help employees?

Expectations on workers have changed greatly over the last few decades. Today they often have to work longer hours in situations which are increasingly emotionally and physically confronting. This essay will outline why this is and suggest how employers can assist those who work for them to deal with these challenges. There are many reasons for this increased stress at work. One is the competitive nature of many workplaces. With an emphasis on productivity and shareholders’ returns, employers often require more of their staff than is reasonable or even humanly possible. McDonalds is one example of this where staff are forced to work long hours just to make a living wage in order to satisfy the demands of customers and the bosses they work for. Another stress employees experience is driven by the company policy of hiring inexperienced staff who are cheaper, and letting go of those who have been in the company for longer. Schools have been known to follow this practice because experienced teachers are much more expensive to employ than newly trained ones. The anxiety this may create for employees can be severe. While changing the practices noted above may not be wholly within the power of an employer, there is much they can do to make working conditions less stressful. One way is for employers to always be willing to listen with an open mind to issues that staff may be having. In a school, for instance, the employer would ensure that the person directly responsible for managing teachers conducted regular meetings in which anything could be raised and that any issues not resolved in such meetings were followed up speedily and with care. For a working environment to be as welcoming and productive as it can be, employers should also be equally the representatives of those they employ as they are representatives of those who have the ultimate say in the business, such as investors and shareholders. An employer who is willing to push back against their demands that, for example, staff need to work longer hours by suggesting that a four day week would in fact raise production levels, would, indeed, help those who work for him. Many employees face difficult working conditions and unsociable hours, which causes stress. Employers can relieve this stress by making sure staff are consulted and by being willing to support them when unreasonable demands are being made of them.
Expectations on workers have
changed
greatly
over the last few decades.
Today


they
often
have to
work
longer
hours
in situations which are
increasingly


emotionally
and
physically
confronting. This essay will outline why this is and

suggest how
employers
can assist those
who
work
for them to deal with these

challenges.

There are
many
reasons for this increased
stress
at
work
. One is the competitive

nature of
many
workplaces. With an emphasis on productivity and shareholders’

returns,
employers
often
require more of their
staff
than is reasonable or even

humanly
possible.
McDonalds
is one example of this where
staff
are forced
to work

long
hours
just
to
make
a living wage in order to satisfy the demands of customers

and the bosses they
work
for. Another
stress
employees experience
is driven
by the

company
policy of hiring inexperienced
staff
who
are cheaper, and letting go of

those
who
have been in the
company
for longer. Schools have
been known
to

follow this practice
because
experienced teachers are much more expensive to

employ than
newly
trained ones. The anxiety this may create for employees can be

severe.

While changing the practices noted above may not be wholly within the power of an

employer, there is much they can do to
make
working conditions less stressful. One

way is for
employers
to always be willing to listen with an open mind to issues that

staff may be having. In a school,
for instance
, the
employer
would ensure that the

person
directly
responsible for managing teachers conducted regular meetings in

which anything could
be raised
and that any issues not resolved in such meetings

were followed
up
speedily
and with care. For a working environment to be as

welcoming and productive as it can be,
employers
should
also
be
equally
the

representatives of those they employ as they are representatives of those
who
have

the ultimate say in the business, such as investors and shareholders. An employer

who is willing to push back against their demands that,
for example
,
staff
need to

work longer
hours
by suggesting that a
four day
week would in fact raise production

levels, would,
indeed
,
help
those
who
work
for him.

Many
employees face difficult working conditions and unsociable
hours
, which

causes
stress
.
Employers
can relieve this
stress
by making sure
staff
are consulted


and by being willing to support them when unreasonable demands are
being made


of them.
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IELTS essay Nowadays many jobs are more stressful and the working day is longer. What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to help employees?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
401 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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