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Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe that other family members can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe that other family members can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers are better. xlkb

It is a fact that in this day and age most families have both the parents employed. Some of them think that their children's care could be taken by other family members like grandparents. However, there is another group of parents who believe that the finest care for their children is provided by childcare centers. This essay will discuss both views before arriving at my opinion. One reason why some employed parents state that the best care for their children comes from their grandparents is probably that they offer unconditional love for their grandchildren. Grandparents can teach their younger generation, life experiences and stories about their lives, resulting in a strong grandparent-grandchildren bond. Thus the children receive the best care from their grandparents. On the contrary, there is another group of working parents who justify that, it is the childcare centers that provide the best care for their children. It is because the childcare centers facilitate as a second home to the children. Also, there are teachers there who teach them basic lessons like alphabets and numbers. In this way, children are more likely to develop learning skills from a young age. In my opinion, childcare centers are more appropriate in the best care that a child could get. Mainly because the childcare centers bring a suitable environment for children to build many qualities like learning skills, social skills, and self-hygiene. The caretaker there can also be like a teacher who teaches them how to become more productive by educating them with the basics. Since there are other kids in the center, it could help them to develop intercommunication skills as they need to mingle with one another. So the children can be well prepared for the education system that exists. To conclude, even though grandparents play an important role in the children's lives and they can take good care of their grandchildren. It cannot be denied that the childcare centers provide the best and finest care to the children should receive.

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