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Nowadays, man and woman have full-time job. So the household chores should be divided equally. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, man and woman have full-time job. So the household chores should be divided equally. j5Y8L

When the question of household task come into view, there exist many trend. Some people strongly tend to believe that household chores should be shared between men and women equally, and I agree with this idea. To begin with, there are two reasons why man and woman should divide the household chores equally. Firstly, dividing everyday tasks will strengthen the family relationship. It is unfair for woman if they have to do both ordinary chores alone and work full time because working full time is very difficult, so that it is necessary for man to give hand in household tasks.

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