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Nowadays, it is quite common for an adult in any countries to have a break from studying after completing high school.

Nowadays, it is quite common for an adult in any countries to have a break from studying after completing high school. The reasons for this trend are travelling and work. This essay will explain the pros and cons of this scenario. To starts with, there are plenty of beneficial things about taking a break. First and foremost, poor students take a break because of financial problem. Student start doing a job, so they become independent and gain knowledge of real-world, which can help them in the future. Furthermore, the best way of learning is through to travel. Students seem various culture during travelling, so they learn a lot from it. That will help in their future education, children will cope up with the future challenges. On the other hand, there are certain the danger of breakage. Firstly, the students take a break and start jobs after that, which is difficult to return into studying. If they come into a college, they cannot focus on a particular subject their mind always think about money. Besides, after travelling, the student feels studying by the traditional method is boring, so they do not go to university. At present day, it is mandatory to have qualifications or degree. Students can’t get a degree, so it is not a reasonable deal for them. To sum up, students meet with many real-life problems during that break, which is useful for their future but coming back to studying is problematic for them. Students can not concentrate on class, they did not archive degree, which is harmful to them.
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after completing high school. The reasons for this trend are travelling and work. This essay will
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and foremost, poor
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take a
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because
of financial problem.
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Student
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start
doing a job,
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so
they become independent and gain knowledge of real-world, which can
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help
them in the
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future
.
Furthermore
, the best way of learning is through to travel.
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Students
seem various culture during travelling,
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so
they learn a lot from it. That will
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help
in their
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future
education, children will cope up with the
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future
challenges.

On the other hand
, there are certain the
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danger
of breakage.
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, the
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students
take a
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and
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jobs after that, which is difficult to return into
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studying
. If they
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come
into a college, they cannot focus on a particular subject their mind always
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think
about money.
Besides
, after travelling, the
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student
feels
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by the traditional method is boring,
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so
they do not go to university. At present day, it is mandatory to have qualifications or degree.
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Students
can’t
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get
a degree,
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so
it is not a reasonable deal for them.

To sum up,
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students
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with
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real-life problems during that
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break
, which is useful for their
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future
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but
coming back to
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studying
is problematic for them.
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Students
can not concentrate on
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class
, they did not archive degree, which is harmful to them.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, it is quite common for an adult in any countries to have a break from studying after completing high school.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
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