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Nowadays, incresing crime in city areas as compare to villege. most of people doing crime in city to fulfil their needs.

Nowadays, incresing crime in city areas as compare to villege. most of people doing crime in city to fulfil their needs. XyqNP

one of the first reasons is that no employment in city areas. due to overpopulation, and more youngsters doing crimes awareness of unemployment. than second reason is that lack of security in the city side, like at night time people do crime more because at night in the city mots of people are take rest at night and criminals can essay do crime due to no security equipment or lack of police officer at night in the city areas. Firstly, the government should provide better employment for poor people. if providing jobs and work more for youngsters so that the crime rate can go down. And the other side government should increase better security programmes to secure their city from criminals. In conclusion, having more employment and better security bring crime down in the city. like more cops and CCTV.

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