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Nowadays in the world, every product is connected with advertisement and mostly if someone buys something online, so they face advertisements because the seller and advertisers get benefits from consumers.

Nowadays in the world, every product is connected with advertisement and mostly if someone buys something online, so they face advertisements because the seller and advertisers get benefits from consumers. Jdb0
Nowadays in the world, every product is connected with advertisement and mostly if someone buys something online, so they face advertisements because the seller and advertisers get benefits from consumers. I strongly disagree with advertisements that come between the products and change the attention of buyers and massive advertisements are fake that they show something else and something else to send and in the same way, the consumer interest is declining from online products and they go to markets for buying their things. And on the other side, many people feel easy to buy online products and they countenance advertisements because the delivery of online products faster than other ways and they can choice everything which they want. In last, I would like to say that the companies should consume the timing of advertisements and show real pictures of their products so it would give benefit to products seller and advertisers.
Nowadays in the world, every
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mostly
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online
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advertisements
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the seller and advertisers
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get
benefits from consumers.

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advertisements
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come
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products
and
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change
the attention of buyers and massive
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advertisements
are fake that they
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show
something else and something else to
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send
and
in the same way
, the consumer interest is declining from
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online
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products and
they go to markets for buying their things.

And on the other side,
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many
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people
feel easy to
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buy
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online
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products and
they countenance
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advertisements
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because
the delivery of
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online
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products
faster than other
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ways and
they
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can choice
everything which they want.

In last, I would like to say that the
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companies
should consume the timing of
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advertisements
and
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show
real pictures of their
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products
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so
it would give benefit to
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products
seller and advertisers.

IELTS essay Nowadays in the world, every product is connected with advertisement and mostly if someone buys something online, so they face advertisements because the seller and advertisers get benefits from consumers.

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151 words
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