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Nowadays in many countries rubbish circulating and half of them it is food waste. Write about solving that problem.

Nowadays in many countries rubbish circulating and half of them it is food waste. Write about solving that problem. wx2wl
Nowadays, waste food stay a simple situation. Every one of all the foodstuffs buy in a store or restaurant. Moreover, from this is restaurant 17 percentage goes directly in the garbage. In commonly, every single year 23metr with 40tonne’s trucks collect garbage and half of that is food. In addition, 900 million tones of food is thrown away every year, sixty percent that waste is in our homes. Scientist discovered that food rubbish can influence to our health with negative side. It creates a bacteria. Scholars supposed the pandemic has had a big impact of food waste. However, researchers find decision and ways to minimize food waste. After conference healthcare campaigns, they connected with inhabitants through social media. Firstly, they should make a shopping list making plan before shopping for does not waste money and does not buy anything which people desire. Secondly, we must to store food in refrigeration to keep it in good condition for a long time. Finally, people should expand knowledge about esthetic. It has a huge role to disappear a food rubbish.
Nowadays,
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waste
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food
stay a simple situation. Every

one of all the foodstuffs
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buy
in a store or restaurant.

Moreover
, from this is restaurant 17 percentage goes

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directly
in the garbage. In
commonly
, every single
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year


23metr with 40tonne’s trucks collect garbage and half of

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that
is
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food
.
In addition
, 900 million tones of
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food
is
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thrown


away every year, sixty percent that
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waste
is in our

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homes
. Scientist discovered that
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food
rubbish
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can


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influence
to our health with
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negative
side. It creates
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a


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bacteria
. Scholars supposed the pandemic has had a
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big


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impact
of
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food
waste.

However
, researchers find decision and ways to minimize

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food
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waste
. After conference healthcare campaigns,
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they


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connected
with inhabitants through social media.
Firstly
,

they should
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make
a shopping list making plan
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before


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shopping
for does not
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waste
money and does not
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buy


anything which
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people
desire.
Secondly
, we
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must to
store

food in refrigeration to
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keep
it in
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good
condition for a long

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time
.
Finally
,
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people
should expand knowledge about

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esthetic
. It has a huge role to disappear a
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food
rubbish.
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IELTS essay Nowadays in many countries rubbish circulating and half of them it is food waste. Write about solving that problem.

Essay
  American English
18 paragraphs
177 words
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