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With the recently developed technology and artificial intelligence nowadays, robots have been invented for the purpose of supporting humans in both offices and household activities. Although, this development has advantages, in my opinion demerits are more significant. On the one hand, why I feel this would be an advantageous for human in each work of life because, robot reduces manual work load. It helps people to keep away from mental and physical illness. For example, in India, every year many manual scavengers lose their lives just because of poor health conditions. They are constantly been exposed to the dirt and filth that makes them exposed to various diseases. However, when their work was replaced with robotic helpers, drastic changes show in work progress with healthy life of the workers. Furthermore, usages of automatic machines such as washing machine, dishwasher and kitchenware robot

With the recently developed technology and artificial intelligence nowadays, robots have been invented for the purpose of supporting humans in both offices and household activities. Although, this development has advantages, in my opinion demerits are more significant. On the one hand, why I feel this would be an advantageous for human in each work of life because, robot reduces manual work load. It helps people to keep away from mental and physical illness. For example, in India, every year many manual scavengers lose their lives just because of poor health conditions. They are constantly been exposed to the dirt and filth that makes them exposed to various diseases. However, when their work was replaced with robotic helpers, drastic changes show in work progress with healthy life of the workers. Furthermore, usages of automatic machines such as washing machine, dishwasher and kitchenware robot GlxQw

With the recently developed technology and artificial intelligence nowadays, robots have been invented for the purpose to support humans in both offices and household activities. Although, this development has advantages, in my opinion, demerits are more significant. On the one hand, why I feel this would be an advantageous for human in each work of life because, robot reduces manual work load. It helps people to keep away from mental and physical illness. For example, in India, every year many manual scavengers lose their lives just because of poor health conditions. They are constantly been exposed to the dirt and filth that makes them exposed to various diseases. However, when their work was replaced with robotic helpers, drastic changes show in work progress with healthy life of the workers. Furthermore, usages of automatic machines such as washing machine, dishwasher and kitchenware robots which has been helped in cooking saving the amount of time and energy. This has helped people to spend quality time with family and friends. On the other hand, I must confess that an increase uses of robotic gadgets in working environment has disadvantageous for mankind. First of all, it will decrease a uses of manpower, as a result the rate of unemployment goes northwards. For instance- one of my friends worked in mobile manufacturing company in Singapore, where company replace fully automatics electronic setup, which resulted many employees along with my friend lost their jobs. Moreover, over uses of electronics people become lazy and will not stay physically fit and active, consequently the percentage of obese people has been increased rapidly and that is the major concern in many developed countries over the globe. In conclusion, although there are many positive aspects like reducing physical stress or spending great time with family by using the robots, we cannot ignore the negative impact that is caused to the human life and to the society at large.

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