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Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this changed improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.12

Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this changed improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 12
Imagine what fun if one could have an American breakfast, a Chinese lunch, and an Indian dinner! It would be a gourmet’s paradise! Modern life has drastically changed food patterns. These days preparation of food has become easier and faster due to the new gadgets as well as the availability of pre-cooked foodstuff. This change has improved the way people live as it has helped to save time as well as enhanced the quality of food. Because of both spouses working, there is a little time left for elaborate cooking daily. Pre-cooked foods that need a minimum of heating or cooking are a great convenience. Time saved in the kitchen can be used for children, other household chores, entertainment, etc. Packaged food has to adhere to strict norms of hygiene and has to get approval from a governmental/private organization. It would help a consumer to choose whether he wants food with protein/carbohydrate/fats content. The calorie content would also help him decide which is suitable for his family. Food is a source of pleasure as well as a basic requirement. So a balanced diet is essential for the family. Packaged and pre-cooked food also gives us a wide choice of cosines so without having to spend much time learning to cook them. With new technology, the cooking and preserving of food have become easier and faster. Various gadgets like the microwave oven and food processor. Which has simplified and facilitated the process of cooking? Deep freezers and refrigerators help to preserve food for a long period, so a variety is always available at one’s fingertips. A visit to the well-stocked, well-displayed food store is both a visual gastronomically delight. Modern technology and methods of cooking have improved the quality of life. It has helped save time, improved health and hygiene, provided a great variety that is always available. This can be seen as a minor revolution, which is a boon for gourmands and gourmets. So now one can eat to live as well as life to eat.
Imagine what fun if one could have an American breakfast, a Chinese lunch, and an Indian dinner! It would be a gourmet’s paradise! Modern life has
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changed
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patterns. These
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preparation of
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has become easier and faster due to the new gadgets as
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as the availability of
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pre-cooked
foodstuff. This
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as enhanced the quality of food.

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for elaborate cooking daily.
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foods
that need a minimum of heating or cooking are a great convenience.
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saved in the kitchen can be
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for children, other household chores, entertainment, etc.

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adhere to strict norms of hygiene and
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approval from a governmental/private organization. It would
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a consumer to choose whether he wants
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with protein/carbohydrate/fats content. The calorie content would
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help
him decide which is suitable for his family.
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is a source of pleasure as
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well
as a basic requirement.
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a balanced diet is essential for the family. Packaged and
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pre-cooked
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also
gives us a wide choice of cosines
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without having to spend much
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learning to cook them.

With new technology, the cooking and preserving of
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food
have become easier and faster. Various gadgets like the microwave oven and
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processor. Which has simplified and facilitated the process of cooking? Deep freezers and refrigerators
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help
to preserve
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for a long period,
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so
a variety is always available at one’s fingertips. A visit to the well-stocked, well-displayed
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food
store is both a visual
gastronomically
delight.

Modern technology and methods of cooking have
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improved
the quality of life. It has
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helped
save
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time
,
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improved
health and hygiene, provided a great variety
that is
always available. This can be
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seen
as a minor revolution, which is a boon for gourmands and gourmets.
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one can eat to
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as
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well
as life to eat.
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IELTS essay Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this changed improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 12

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
336 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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