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Nowadays every car, which burns out non-renewable energy should be

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Nowadays every car, which burns out non-renewable energy should be prohibited and should modify with automobile powered by electricity. In my opinion, an electrified vehicle is more sufficient than another kind of cars, which can produce carbon dioxide, as a result, firstly, changing a type of vehicle can minimize carbon footprint in the environment, furthermore driving an electric vehicle, such as Tesla cars are more reliable and confident, rather than other types of cars. Firstly, replace fossil fuel-based cars will help to reduce Co2 emissions to an acceptable level. As a consequence, the proportion of carbonic acid gas in the air might be drowned, if we swap old-style vehicle to the new one, which is run by electric. Also, tend to motor the electric automobile decrease the range of air pollution. In Russia, the government chancing the oils vehicles to the electric car provides the environment less Co2 for the last decade.
Nowadays every
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car
, which burns out non-renewable energy should
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and should modify with automobile powered by electricity. In my opinion, an electrified
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vehicle
is more sufficient than another kind of
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cars
, which can produce carbon dioxide,
as a result
,
firstly
, changing a type of
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vehicle
can minimize carbon footprint in the environment,
furthermore
driving an
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electric
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vehicle
, such as Tesla
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cars
are more reliable and confident,
rather
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cars
.
Firstly
, replace fossil fuel-based
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cars
will
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help
to
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Co2 emissions to an acceptable level. As a consequence, the proportion of carbonic acid gas in the air might
be drowned
, if we swap
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old
-style
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vehicle
to the new one, which
is run
by
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electric
.
Also
, tend to motor the
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electric
automobile decrease the range of air pollution. In Russia, the
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government
chancing the oils
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vehicles
to the
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electric
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car
provides the environment less Co2 for the last decade.
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IELTS essay Nowadays every car, which burns out non-renewable energy should be

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