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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? lowJ
Almost everyone loves to read or see celebrity gossip. On television there are shows devoted to it, in newspapers we can find gossip coloms and there are magazines devoted to this topic alone. The internet and social media is another platform to share celebrity information, and the web is flodded with information about famous people from all over the world. Some people may say that it is too much and it is too invasive, while others may argue that the lack of privacy is the price to pay for fame and furtune. On one hand, celebrities enjoy the fruits of beening a famous person. They enjoy discounts, get privilaged treat wherever they go, and basicly the red carpet is always there for them. In most cases the fame bears with a generous futun, and the fame come with dollar signs with it. Some people will say that the lack of privacy is a small price to pay for all of that, and famous people can choose when to share and show themselves. Nowadays pop culture got very invasive. The rise of the paparazzi started at the late '90s. The most familiar celebrity- paparazzi relationship that we know from that time is the one that Princess Diana had with the media, and we all know that that story ended in a terible way. Some people argue, myself included, that nowadays, 20 years later, it got worse and the invation to privacy esclated with social media in our lives. Today, Famous people find it harder to get off the grid and some of them even lock themselves at theire houses to avoid the sneaky paparazzi. In conclusion, both sides have there fair point, on one hand celebrity do enjoy the benifits of beenig famous and their fans whant them to share it with them. On the other hand, people should deside what to share and what they would prefer to keep private. Pople should not be scared from rendom cameras thaking thier pics when they wish not to do so.
Almost everyone
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loves
to read or
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see
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celebrity
gossip. On television there are
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shows
devoted to it, in newspapers we can find gossip
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coloms
and there are magazines devoted to this topic alone. The internet and social media is another platform to
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share
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celebrity
information, and the web is
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flodded
with information about
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famous
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people
from all over the world.

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Some
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people
may say that it is too much and it is too invasive, while others may argue that the lack of privacy is the price to pay for fame and
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furtune
.

On one hand,
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celebrities
enjoy the fruits of
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beening
a
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famous
person. They enjoy discounts,
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get
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privilaged
treat wherever they go, and
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basicly
the red carpet is always there for them.

In most cases
the fame bears with a generous
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futun
, and the fame
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come
with dollar signs with it.

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Some
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people
will say that the lack of privacy is a
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small
price to pay for all of that, and
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famous
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people
can choose when to
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share
and
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show
themselves.

Nowadays pop culture
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got
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very
invasive. The rise of the paparazzi
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started
at the late '90s. The most familiar
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celebrity-
paparazzi relationship that we know from that time is the one that Princess Diana had with the media, and we all know that that story ended in a
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terible
way.
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Some
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people
argue, myself included, that nowadays, 20 years later, it
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got
worse and the
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invation
to privacy
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esclated
with social media in our
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lives
.
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Today
,
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Famous
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people
find it harder to
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get
off the grid and
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some
of them even lock themselves at
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theire
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houses
to avoid the sneaky paparazzi.

In conclusion
, both sides have there
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fair
point, on one hand
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celebrity
do enjoy the
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benifits
of
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beenig
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famous
and their fans
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whant
them to
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share
it with them.
On the other hand
,
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people
should
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deside
what to
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share
and what they would prefer to
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keep
private.
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Pople
should not
be scared
from
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rendom
cameras
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thaking
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thier
pics when they wish not to do
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so
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IELTS essay Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
338 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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