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Nowadays Enourmous Number of Students And Working Adults Are Performing There Task By Comfort From There Homes I think This Is Most Significant and Economic Way Of Doing The Work.

Nowadays Enourmous Number of Students And Working Adults Are Performing There Task By Comfort From There Homes I think This Is Most Significant and Economic Way Of Doing The Work. pg10
Nowadays Enourmous Number of Students And Working Adults Are Performing There Task By Comfort From There Homes I think This Is Most Significant and Economic Way Of Doing The Work. But Plethora Of People Did NOt Considered This Way. Although I believe That This Method Will Save Lot Of TIme Although There Are Numerous Drawbacks Also. Techonogical Improvements made People Life very Comfortable. Students Were taking There Class From Homes This Will Save Travelling Time And Provide Some Extra Time To Perform Numerous Extra Curriculum Activities. Same As Adults people Have Tremendous Work Of Home They Can Easily Cover Both Prominent Work by Sitting Home. For Instance Since Last Year My All Classes Was Going On by Online Mode With The Help Of reliant Technology It Saves my Around Almost 3 Hours Which I waste On Travelling Because OF Enourmous Traffic And Provides Me Extra Time For Learning New Skills. Every Thing Have Two Aspect Likewise Positive And Negative So After Highlighting The Merit Of Work From Home Meanwhile I Would Like To put Somelight on Drawbacks Of it Similarly Students Cannot Make Such Focused On Study By sitting At Homes. Furthermore Office Environment Will Makes More Curious To Adults To Perfom Well The More They Work By Sitting In Front OF Boss The More Curious They Became. For Instance sometimes Students Did Not Afraind From There Parents While In Class They Have Fear Of Teachers Same As Adults Will Become More Comfortable By Performing There Task In Front Of Bosse In Conclusion Technology have made Enourmous Changes In human Life On the Contrary IT is better to do more task while sitting at home
Nowadays
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Enourmous
Number of
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Students
And Working
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Adults
Are Performing There Task By Comfort From There
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Homes
I
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think
This Is Most Significant and
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Economic
Way Of Doing The
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Work
.
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But
Plethora Of
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People
Did
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NOt
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Considered
This Way. Although I believe That This Method Will Save
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Lot Of
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TIme
Although There Are Numerous Drawbacks
Also
.

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Techonogical
Improvements made
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People
Life
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very
Comfortable.
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Students
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Were
taking There
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Class
From
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Homes
This Will Save Travelling
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Time
And Provide
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Some
Extra
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Time
To Perform Numerous Extra Curriculum Activities. Same As
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Adults
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people
Have Tremendous
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Work
Of Home They Can
Easily
Cover Both Prominent
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Work
by
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Sitting
Home.
For Instance
Since Last Year My All Classes Was Going On by Online Mode With The
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Help
Of reliant Technology It Saves my Around Almost 3 Hours Which I waste On Travelling
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Because
OF
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Enourmous
Traffic And Provides Me Extra
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Time
For Learning New
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Skills
.

Every Thing
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Have
Two Aspect
Likewise
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Positive
And
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So
After Highlighting The Merit Of
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Work
From Home Meanwhile I Would Like To put
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Somelight
on Drawbacks Of it
Similarly
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Students
Cannot
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Make
Such Focused On Study By
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sitting
At
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Homes
.
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Furthermore
Office Environment Will
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Makes
More Curious To
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Adults
To
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Perfom
Well The More They
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Work
By
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Sitting
In Front OF Boss The More Curious They Became.
For Instance
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sometimes
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Students
Did Not
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From There Parents While In
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Class
They Have Fear Of Teachers Same As
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Adults
Will Become More Comfortable By Performing There Task In Front Of
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Bosse


In Conclusion
Technology have made
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Enourmous
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Changes
In human Life
On the Contrary
IT is better to do more task while
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sitting
at home
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IELTS essay Nowadays Enourmous Number of Students And Working Adults Are Performing There Task By Comfort From There Homes I think This Is Most Significant and Economic Way Of Doing The Work.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
5.5
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