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ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task. : Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? r262
When a Country's population keeps multiplying each year, It is natural that there will be automatic increase in the production of rubbish by common people. Off late, we could see more rubbish are dumped in every corner of the streets. There are multiple reasons that contribute to it. The first and foremost reason would be use of Plastics. Though, Few governments have banned the use of plastics in their countries, The country which I live in, is yet to take a firm stand on this. Right from Manufacturer who packages a product to the end customer who buys the product use plastic bags to carry it to their home. This drastic increase in the use of plastics in the last 50 years has resulted in the increase of rubbish in our country. From my personal experience, I have seen rubbish over filling from the trash can in my area every single day. Most of them were plastics. I have also seen the trash collected from our homes are burnt in air outside the city. So, burning off these plastics will again contribute to air pollution. Plastics which are left uncollected from the ground might get struck somewhere and prevent the water flow in pipes or they are going to affect the earth's soil. People should learn more about recycling products. I have also seen many companies dumbing their electronic, chemical or medical waste in the streets. I have seen plenty of expired tablet strips and electronic parts in the trash can. The company, without planning or making any effort to recycle their waste, Simply dump in the dump yard. This has contributed to a lot of rubbish in the recent times. The government should create awareness among people on the harmful effects caused by the use of Plastics to our environment. They should take necessary steps to ban its use and encourage people to use bags made of Cloth or Jute. Again, A change can happen only if it is 2-way. So, The people in our country should support the government if they do things in order to safe guard our environment. Government should take stringent action against such companies as well which throws away their rubbish in the dumbyard without any kind of recycling. To conclude, If these two things are taken up by the government as priority, Then we can definitely make this earth a better place to live in for the generations to come.
When a Country's population
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multiplying each year, It is natural that there will be automatic increase in the production of
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rubbish
by common
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people
. Off late, we could
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see
more
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rubbish
are dumped
in every corner of the streets. There are multiple reasons that contribute to it.

The
first
and foremost reason would be
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use
of
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Plastics
. Though, Few
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governments
have banned the
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use
of
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plastics
in their countries, The country which I
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live
in, is
yet
to take a firm stand on this. Right from Manufacturer who packages a product to the
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end
customer who
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buys
the product
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use
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plastic
bags to carry it to their home. This drastic increase in the
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use
of
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plastics
in the last 50 years has resulted in the increase of
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rubbish
in our country.

From my personal experience, I have
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seen
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rubbish
over filling from the trash can in my area every single day. Most of them were
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plastics
. I have
also
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seen
the trash collected from our homes
are burnt
in air outside the city.
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So
, burning off these
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plastics
will again contribute to air pollution.
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Plastics
which are
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left
uncollected from the ground might
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get
struck somewhere and
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prevent
the water flow in
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pipes or
they are going to affect the earth's soil.
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People
should learn more about recycling products.

I have
also
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seen
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many
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companies
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dumbing
their electronic, chemical or medical waste in the streets. I have
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seen
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plenty
of expired tablet strips and electronic parts in the trash can. The
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company
, without planning or making any effort to recycle their waste,
Simply
dump in the dump yard. This has contributed to
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a lot of
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rubbish
in the recent times.

The
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government
should create awareness among
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people
on the harmful effects caused by the
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use
of
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Plastics
to our environment. They should take necessary steps to ban its
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use
and encourage
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people
to
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use
bags made of Cloth or Jute. Again, A
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change
can happen
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only
if it is 2-way.
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So
, The
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people
in our country should support the
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government
if they do things in order to safe guard our environment.

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Government
should take stringent action against such
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companies
as well
which throws away their
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rubbish
in the
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dumbyard
without any kind of recycling.

To conclude
, If these two things
are taken
up by the
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government
as priority, Then we can definitely
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make
this earth a better place to
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live
in for the generations to
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come
.
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IELTS essay ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task. : Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
407 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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