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Nowadays, animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of various products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of various products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. BJM55
Using animals in experiments is a common practice in research. Thousands of laboratories around the world use animals such as monkeys and rats to test drugs and other products. The reason for this is because it is safer rather than using humans. I personally disagree with using the animal in the experiment setting because it caused harm to the animal. Besides, there are other alternative ways. The researcher needs to prioritize the safety of the medicine to be used by humans. Though it is more effective to use on humans, it is too dangerous. Hence using it on the animal is more acceptable compared to the human. This is because animals have the same biological as humans especially mammals. For example, using mice in medical research have proven to be effective in finding cure for many diseases. However, in many cases, the research done on animals cause pain and suffering. For instance, before conducting an experiment, animals are kept in small cages in closed rooms. They are injected with all types of chemicals and dissected for results. Therefore, animal activists around the world give pressure on the government to ban animal testing. Besides, with the recent development on technologies, there are alternative way such as using cells and computerized human. These ways is more relevant and can replace the animal. In conclusion, there is a hot debate whether or not animal testing is ethically acceptable in society. Although there are good reasons not to ban animal research, I do strongly believe that testing on animals can be avoidable. As a human, we need to decide a safer way to live with an animal.
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animals
in experiments is a common practice in
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research
. Thousands of laboratories around the world
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animals
such as monkeys and rats to
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test
drugs and other products.
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rather
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personally
disagree with using the
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animal
in the experiment setting
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because
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animal
.
Besides
, there are other alternative ways.

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used
by
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humans
. Though it is more effective to
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use
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humans
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dangerous
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animal
is more acceptable compared to the
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human
. This is
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because
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animals
have the same biological as
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humans
especially
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, using mice in medical
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research
have proven to be effective in finding cure for
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many
diseases.

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, in
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many
cases, the
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research
done on
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animals
cause pain and suffering.
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before
conducting an experiment,
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animals
are
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kept
in
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small
cages in closed rooms. They
are injected
with all types of chemicals and dissected for results.
Therefore
,
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animal
activists around the world give pressure on the
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government
to ban
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animal
testing.
Besides
, with the recent development on technologies, there are
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alternative
way such as using cells and computerized
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human
. These ways
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is
more relevant and can replace the animal.

In conclusion
, there is a hot debate
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whether or not
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animal
testing is
ethically
acceptable in society. Although there are
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good
reasons not to ban
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animal
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research
, I do
strongly
believe that testing on
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animals
can be avoidable. As a
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human
, we need to decide a safer way to
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live
with an
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animal
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of various products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity.

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