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sports deserve a great deal of importance in our life. Discuss

sports deserve a great deal of importance in our life. Discuss BJM5V
Nowadays sports play a key factor in people’s life. All are busy with their stressful work also do not worry about their health. It is highly beneficial to improve one’s body and mental health. The primary reason, it keeps people fit and healthy because it is boost immunity power, built body strengthen. This help to improves mind strength such concentration, petitions. It is make very attentive and alert. If any one play any game player has to face so many challenging situation. It is also helps in running life. In games all time you won it is not possible consequently habitual with defeat otherwise it is difficult to endure in routine life. Furthermore, it helps to burn unnecessary calories from body so it is reduce obesity also minimize heart problem. It reduce your stress level there for it is remedy of numerous mental health issue. In many games such as volleyball, football, cricket person play with team so that many good skills develop also person can learn many qualities like handle team member. It is teaches how to cooperate with team member. it is developed sports men spirit like player have to play with peace and harmony. People learn so many outstanding qualities it is extremely help them in game as well real life. To conclude, It is clear that there is an immense contribution of sports towards our day to day life. Therefore, No one can ignore importance of sports and given human life to fit and fine.
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any game player
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spirit like player
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with peace and harmony.
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IELTS essay sports deserve a great deal of importance in our life. Discuss

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
249 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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