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Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. GE6L
testing products on animals dates back centuries, but nowadays Problems of animal experimentation are often discussed among people. It is often said that animals should not be used in testing and in the opposite, it is said that using animals for testing medicines is inevitable. This essay will examine the arguments about animal testing. Firstly, it is obvious that striking progress in annihilating diseases and viruses would not have been made without testing medicines on animals, since it is not possible to test chemicals and products on a healthy person and as well as computer models are new and are not precise they don’t have enough reliability, thus testing on animals is the only choice. They say if we don’t pay this price, the human generation will be extincted from illness, and most would agree the price paid has been worth it until now. On the other hand, opponents of animal experiments maintain that the life of every creature is precious, and we have to respect the animal’s life. Besides, many of these tests cause pain and suffer and when we can’t tolerate this pain it’s very ruthless to condemn innocent animals to this amount of pain. Some scientists said that many of the recent experiments are used to testing the new cosmetic products and totally not worth the life of an animal. Another issue is that sometimes an experiment on animals gives us the wrong result because animal’s bodies are not exactly the same as our own. As a consequence, this testing may not be providing the safety that its proponents claim. In conclusion, it’s clear that if we had not done these experiments, some illnesses and diseases would have been destroyed our life but we don’t have the right to murder and torture other creatures to continue our generation.
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dates back centuries,
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nowadays Problems of
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animal
experimentation are
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discussed among
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. It is
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said that
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animals
should not be
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testing
and in the opposite, it
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that using
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animals
for
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medicines is inevitable. This essay will examine the arguments about
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animal
testing.

Firstly
, it is obvious that striking progress in annihilating diseases and viruses would not have
been made
without
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testing
medicines on
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animals
, since it is not possible to
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test
chemicals and products on a healthy person and
as well
as computer models are new and are not precise they don’t have
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enough
reliability,
thus
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testing
on
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animals
is the
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only
choice. They say if we don’t pay this price, the human generation will
be extincted
from illness, and most would
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agree
the price paid has been worth it until
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now
.

On the other hand
, opponents of
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animal
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experiments
maintain that the
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life
of every creature is precious, and we
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have to
respect the
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animal’s
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life
.
Besides
,
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many
of these
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tests
cause pain and suffer and when we can’t tolerate this pain it’s
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ruthless to condemn innocent
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animals
to this amount of pain.
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scientists said that
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many
of the recent
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experiments
are
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used
to
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testing
the new cosmetic products and
totally
not worth the
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life
of an
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animal
. Another issue is that
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sometimes
an
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experiment
on
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gives us the
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wrong
result
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because
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animal’s
bodies are not exactly the same as our
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own
. As a consequence, this
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testing
may not be providing the safety that its proponents claim.

In conclusion
, it’s
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clear
that if we had not done these
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experiments
,
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some
illnesses and diseases would have been
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destroyed
our
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life
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but
we don’t have the right to murder and torture other creatures to continue our generation.
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IELTS essay Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity.

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