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Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. DJ16
Due to today’s modern world and busy life style, people are found easily to get lot’s of disease in small span. In response of this many pharmaceutical company are in great demand to provide medicines in lots of variations. As medicines are chemical products, consuming it before knowing the side effect on human may have lots of issues, so animals are used as a lab rat for testing the result of particular product. Some people oppose this and ask for high demand on a ban of using animals for experiment purpose, while others feel it good to test on animals before experimenting which can save human race from further consequences. Firstly, human history is been drawn from animals, so there are many similarity in human and animals in terms of physics and internal body structor. This is one of the reason why experiments are carried on animals to server humans demand. According to some people It’s totally wrong to kill or use animals for human needs, as they are also part of this word. There has also seen many after effects in the animals genetics which has cause death of animals and may cause distinct of this animal from earth for ever. In contract, some believe’s using animals are better than trying direct on human being, as human race is more important than any other race on planet. They believe human being is the smartest animal on the planet and has right to survive than any species. If experiments trials are carried directly on humans, it might lead to pandemic situation in which people might pay with their life just for experiment purpose. Also human is not strong as animals to give the accurate result on the product. In my opinion, using animals for trial and experiment purpose should be control, where ever we find, we should replace animals with technology stuff on the upfront, also further we should plan how can we reduce use any living creature for man kind benefits. In this both animals and human race will be save and we should not forget that we both are children of Mother Earth.
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get
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lot’s
of disease in
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span. In response of this
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pharmaceutical
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are in great demand to provide medicines in lots of variations. As medicines are chemical products, consuming it
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before
knowing the side effect on
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human
may have lots of issues,
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so
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animals
are
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used
as a lab rat for testing the result of particular product.
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Some
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people
oppose this and
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ask for
high demand on a ban of using
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animals
for
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experiment
purpose, while others feel it
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good
to
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test
on
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animals
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before
experimenting which can save
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human
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race
from
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consequences.

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human
history
is been
drawn from
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animals
,
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there are
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similarity in
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human
and
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animals
in terms of physics and internal body
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structor
. This is one of the reason why
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experiments
are carried
on
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animals
to server
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humans
demand. According to
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some
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people
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totally
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wrong
to kill or
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use
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animals
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needs, as they are
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seen
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after effects in the
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animals
genetics which has cause death of
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animals
and may cause distinct of this
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from earth for ever.

In contract,
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believe’s
using
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animals
are better than trying direct on
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human
being, as
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human
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race
is more
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important
than any other
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race
on planet. They believe
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human
being is the smartest
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animal
on the planet and has right to survive than any species. If
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experiments
trials
are carried
directly
on
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humans
, it might lead to pandemic situation in which
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people
might pay with their life
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for
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experiment
purpose.
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Also
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human
is not strong as
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animals
to give the accurate result on the product.

In my opinion, using
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animals
for trial and
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experiment
purpose should be control, where ever we find, we should replace
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animals
with technology stuff on the upfront,
also
further
we should plan how can we
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reduce
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use
any living creature for
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man
kind benefits. In this both
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animals
and
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human
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race
will be
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save and
we should not forget that we both are children of Mother Earth.
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IELTS essay Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity.

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