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nowadays animal experiments ae widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. some people argue that these experimets should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of th v.2

nowadays animal experiments ae widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. some people argue that these experimets should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of th v. 2
Medical health care of human has become more imperative than ever before in the modern life. Development of medicine is the important step in this feature, and animal experiments has been the main step to make sure the safety to human. Some people object to using animal as experiment because of these negative impacts to animal, in the other’s pinion, it has many benefits to humanity. To begin with, Test the new drug in animal at laboratory is the most effective way to. see clearly the result of the medicine in general. Due to the reaction of animal is nearly similar to human. It is the best choice for scientist to measure the quality of medicine in this period. To be specific, the amount of disease or illness is reducing and there have many kind of successful vaccine, which can prevent human from different kind of viruses. In addition, the research aim to cut the painful and less harmful to animal, the meaning of animal research is humanitarian so it should not be banned. On the other hand, some people believe that the lives of animal should be respected. Opponents of such research argue that humans have no right to subject the animal to this kind of trauma. Animal is the important part of the Earth, it has positive influence on balancing the biology ecosystems. Reducing in the number of animal has a big impact to nature, and that is why people should stop using animal as experiments. In conclusion, I am of opinion that there should have some restriction to limit the amount of animal and using it in necessary situations.
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has become more imperative than ever
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in the modern life. Development of medicine is the
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important
step in this feature, and
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animal
experiments has been the main step to
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make
sure the safety to
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human
.
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Some
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people
object to using
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animal
as experiment
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because
of these
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negative
impacts to
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animal
, in the other’s pinion, it has
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many
benefits to humanity.

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begin
with,
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Test
the new drug in
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animal
at laboratory is the most effective way to.
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see
clearly
the result of the medicine
in general
. Due to the reaction of
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animal
is
nearly
similar to
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human
. It is the best choice for scientist to measure the quality of medicine in this period. To be specific, the amount of disease or illness is reducing and there have
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of successful vaccine, which can
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prevent
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human
from
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different
kind of viruses.
In addition
, the research aim to
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cut
the painful and less harmful to
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animal
, the meaning of
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animal
research is humanitarian
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so
it should not
be banned
.

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,
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people
believe that the
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lives
of
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animal
should
be respected
. Opponents of such research argue that
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humans
have no right to subject the
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animal
to this kind of trauma.
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Animal
is the
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important
part of the Earth, it has
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positive
influence on balancing the biology ecosystems. Reducing in the number of
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animal
has a
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big
impact to nature, and
that is
why
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people
should
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stop
using
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animal
as experiments.

In conclusion
, I am of opinion that there should have
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some
restriction to limit the amount of
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animal
and using it in necessary situations.
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IELTS essay nowadays animal experiments ae widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. some people argue that these experimets should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of th v. 2

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