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What things you couldn't live without.

What things you couldn't live without. Og0X7

We as humans are attached to things or persons in this world and even sometimes not capable of living without them because this makes us carry on with our lives with hope and enthusiasm. I, personally, couldn't live without Music. Music for me is everything. It feels like that my feelings explode with every rhythm in a song and I get released. When a song is playing, it seems that I have supernatural power and I'm able to do anything. I wake up with music, and at the end of the day, I go to bed with music. If I don't, then I can't sleep. So it left me with no choice but to listen to some music in bed. If you ask me, there is no fun and joy without music. Our hearts pump with the rhythm of pieces of music. We can talk to each other with the use of lyrics. So as long as there exists a rhythm, my heart will pulse.

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