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Nowadays, a lot of people prefer communicating with others through social network to through face-to-face meetings. This tendency may cause negative effects. Give your opinion.

Nowadays, a lot of people prefer communicating with others through social network to through face-to-face meetings. This tendency may cause negative effects. Give your opinion. aVDMV
IPeople have different views about society communication. While most individuals have a tendency to talk with others by social media, I hold an opposite view that people should have face-to-face interaction. There are several positive points from communicating through the Internet. First of all, it cannot be denied that people have more opportunity to expand social relationships. By developing modern technology, an increasing number of applications such as Facebook, Zalo, Twister and so on which allow human to chat as well as make video call easily. In addition, by online interaction, individuals could save money and time from face-to-face meetings. In facts, many meetings are held online for people from all over the world. Especially, when the Covid-19 epidemic outbreak the community rapidly, online meetings for business and schools are necessary to ease the spread of it. In my opinion, I strongly assume that online interaction have negative consequences. To begin with, it may detrimental impact on relationships. When lacking of face-to-face meeting, relationship between human-to-human is eased. It’s hard to feel sincerity from opponent. In other words, online meetings reduce significantly communication skills in real life. Thurs, people would become inactive in conversation. Last but not least, Internet users are at risk of being cheated through the Internet. The more people communication online, the more cybercrime increases. In conclusion, communicating through the Internet brings benefits for human in the modern technological society. Personally, I strong believe that it has negative effect on social relationships in real life as well as communication skills.
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IPeople
have
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different
views about society
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communication
. While most individuals have a tendency to talk with others by social media, I hold an opposite view that
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people
should have face-to-face interaction.

There are several
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positive
points from communicating through the Internet.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, it cannot
be denied
that
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people
have more opportunity to expand social
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relationships
. By developing modern technology, an increasing number of applications such as Facebook,
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Zalo
, Twister and
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so
on which
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allow
human to chat
as well
as
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make
video call
easily
.
In addition
, by
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online
interaction, individuals could save money and time from face-to-face
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meetings
. In facts,
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many
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meetings
are held
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online
for
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people
from all over the world.
Especially
, when the Covid-19 epidemic outbreak the community
rapidly
,
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online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meetings
for business and schools are necessary to
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ease
the spread of it.

In my opinion, I
strongly
assume that
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online
interaction have
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negative
consequences. To
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begin
with, it
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may detrimental
impact on
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relationships
. When lacking of face-to-face
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meeting
,
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relationship
between human-to-human is
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eased
. It’s
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hard
to feel sincerity from opponent.
In other words
,
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online
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meetings
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reduce
significantly
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communication
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skills
in real life. Thurs,
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people
would become inactive in conversation. Last
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but
not least, Internet users are at
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risk
of
being cheated
through the Internet. The more
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people
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communication
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online
, the more cybercrime increases.

In conclusion
, communicating through the Internet brings benefits for human in the modern technological society.
Personally
, I strong
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believe
that it has
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negative
effect on social
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relationships
in real life
as well
as
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communication
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skills
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, a lot of people prefer communicating with others through social network to through face-to-face meetings. This tendency may cause negative effects. Give your opinion.

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