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Traffic is only controlled by maintaining and developing roads. Discuss

Traffic is only controlled by maintaining and developing roads. Discuss K0g6M
There is no doubt that wide number of concerns are arising such as global warming, corruption. But one of the major issues that may eliminate number of other problem is traffic. Traffic is increasing day by day due to many reasons and both individual as well as government had equal responsibility to maintain it. In this essay, it will be discussed that there can be other way to control traffic beside maintaining and developing roads. To begin the major reason behind traffic in our country is poor infrastructure. As in some of backward areas roads are not maintained properly. Most of the roads are left in middle and not completed properly. Due to which they started to use routes of other town which resulted in rush on roads it may sometime lead to accident as wide number of individuals using same roads. The most effective way to decrease level of traffic is roads should be maintained from time to time and new road should be constructed for villagers who does not have their own path. Another reason behind traffic as everyone have to go to their workplace as they have same time it may also lead to traffic as nowadays most of the people use their own private vehicles rather than public buses. It not only wastage of fuel but also made roads conjusted. There is need to make people aware about it. There are other alternative there they can go for car pulling too. It not only benefit them but also environment. In nutshell, above discussed is that traffic can be controlled by two ways. However it is duty of both government as well as individuals. This problem can be decreased to some extent if they both devote equally.
There is no doubt that wide number of concerns are arising such as global warming, corruption.
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But
one of the major issues that may eliminate number of
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other
problem is
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traffic
.
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Traffic
is increasing day by day due to
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many
reasons and both individual
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as well as
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government
had equal responsibility to maintain it. In this essay, it will
be discussed
that there can be
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other
way to control
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traffic
beside maintaining and developing
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roads
. To
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begin
the major reason behind
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traffic
in our country is poor infrastructure.
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As
in
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some of backward
areas
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roads
are not maintained
properly
. Most of the
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are
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left
in middle and not completed
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. Due to which they
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started
to
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use
routes of
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other
town which resulted in rush on
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roads
it may sometime lead to accident as wide number of individuals using same
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roads
. The most effective way to decrease level of
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traffic
is
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roads
should
be maintained
from time to time and new
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road
should
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for villagers who
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does
not have their
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path. Another reason behind
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as everyone
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have
to go to their workplace as they have same time it may
also
lead to
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traffic
as nowadays most of the
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people
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use
their
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wastage of fuel
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also
made
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conjusted
. There
is need
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make
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people
aware about it. There are
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there they can go for car pulling too. It not
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only
benefit them
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also
environment. In nutshell, above discussed is that
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as well as
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to
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some
extent if they both devote
equally
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IELTS essay Traffic is only controlled by maintaining and developing roads. Discuss

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  American English
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